用優美的句子改寫《采花賊》

哦，可以這題目就讓人反感一個讓人反感的題目怎么有好心情去改寫

把芙蓉樓送辛漸改寫成兩段優美的句子

好的文章就像案頭的山水，引人入勝，優美的語句可以如同香醇的美酒，耐人尋味

把下面的句子改寫成排比句（3分） 音樂家常常把靈感變為跳躍的音符，文學家呢，他們優美的辭章往往緣

修改后：To my surprise, that strange woman send me a message last night telling me that the weather is getting cold, and that I should be more careful. Only she knows. When I heard that my grandpa might be moving in tonight, I think it"s great. owever,when I heard that my uncle want my grandpa to live in his home because he heard that whoever that let my grandpa live with them will receive a fund from the social welfare office. When my grandpa was living in my uncle"s home, he didn"t take good care of him. My grandpa dislikes him as well. But what made me angry was that my uncles says that if my grandpa moves into his house, he will have to pay CNY $800 every month as rent. I cannot understand why my grandpa has such a hatable son. How can he treat his father like this? Just for money!? Luckily, my grandpa said that he no longer wants to live in his house, and this is his wish, and my uncle has no right to stop him.希望對你有幫助~天上~注：1.peculiar是 特殊的；獨特的；奇怪的；罕見的 的意思，與你要說的 奇怪的 相差很遠。

用詞不當。

2. noticing me 在英文中是 注意到我 的意思，而不是 提醒我 的意思。

用telling就可以。

3. insurance 是保險的意思，社保是社會保障，不是社會保險啊 - - 4. 好好照顧某人的英文是 take good care of sb. 不是 take good of sb. - -5. hate是憎恨的意思，先不說血濃于水一個父親不可能憎恨兒子，就說你的翻譯就和你的原文不符，討厭的英文是dislike。

6. 句子不夠流暢，還有有些地方可以用別的方式更好的表達另，如果不明白，可以HI我~