12月英語四級考前作文預測及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)根據調查，目前在全國的大城市中有大約80%的中學生都有私人家教
2)分析中學生請家教的利弊
3)你的看法
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現象的利弊，提綱第3點要求談談我的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述中學生請家教的現狀;分析中學生請家教的利弊;談談我對中學生請家教現象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. However, private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know the weak points as well as the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. For another, some tutors, busy shuttling from one family to another, tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
Considering the above-mentioned, I think the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potential. Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
【亮點點評】
非常關注。
過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
有利有弊。弊大于利。
弱點。優點。
插入語。
傾向于，往往。
用于得出結論。considering用作介詞，意為考慮到，鑒于。
and連接的平行結構。
only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.
臨摩：無論多么困難的一項任務，只要有決心都能夠完成。
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2.佳句：It takes up so much of the pupils time that they can har
hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.
臨摩：社會上有如此多的誘惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能誤入歧途。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.
臨摩： 傳統食物的烹飪往往很耗時，而且需要花費很多時間和精力去學習。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.
2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.
3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)根據調查，目前在全國的大城市中有大約80%的中學生都有私人家教
2)分析中學生請家教的利弊
3)你的看法
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現象的利弊，提綱第3點要求談談我的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述中學生請家教的現狀;分析中學生請家教的利弊;談談我對中學生請家教現象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. However, private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know the weak points as well as the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. For another, some tutors, busy shuttling from one family to another, tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
Considering the above-mentioned, I think the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils potential. Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
【亮點點評】
非常關注。
過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
有利有弊。弊大于利。
弱點。優點。
插入語。
傾向于，往往。
用于得出結論。considering用作介詞，意為考慮到，鑒于。
and連接的平行結構。
only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.
臨摩：無論多么困難的一項任務，只要有決心都能夠完成。
___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：It takes up so much of the pupils time that they can har
hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment.
臨摩：社會上有如此多的誘惑以至于稍一疏忽就可能誤入歧途。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：Some tutors tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.
臨摩： 傳統食物的烹飪往往很耗時，而且需要花費很多時間和精力去學習。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. A task, no matter how difficult it is, can be accomplished, provided that one makes up his mind to do it.
2. There are so many temptations in the society that with a little carelessness we may go astray.
3. The cooking of traditional food tends to be time-consuming and takes much time and energy to learn.
