201大學英語四級沖刺之寫作強化訓練四
附：重點話題與句型
1) With more emphasis put on building a harmonious society, people begin to realize the importance of solving the problem of inequality
2) Since sustainable development is our main goal, we should pay more attention to striking a balance between economic development and environmental protection
3) As the central task of our country is to build a well-off society in an all-round way, more efforts are being made to improve the living standards of the people
4) With the rapid growth of our economy , an increasing number of problems have arisen, such as
5) With the rapid development of science and technology , more and more people come to realize that
6) Currently, there is a widespread concern over high unemployment rate .
7) Nowadays, a heated debate about private cars is under way in China.
8) As the public awareness of market economy heightens,
9) Unless we put more emphasis on environmental protection , the problem will be a hindrance to our building a harmonious society.
10) Different people hold different views on accession to WTO . Some are in favor of, while others are against
11) The case only reveals the tip of an ugly iceberg of serious environmental pollution
12) When it comes to the problem of eating wild animals
13) As far as family planning is concerned, there is much room for improvement.
14) All these statistics reveal a painful fact that corruption is spreading rapidly in our country
15) Without love, my classmate Xiao Wang would have died in the hospital. But with our love and care, he survived the illness and can enjoy his life now.
16) Without computers , it would be difficult to imagine modern life.
17) It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation
18) The participating Slogan should be an embodiment of the concept of Green Olympics, Hi-Tech Olympics and Peoples Olympics with Peoples Olympics as its highlight and should reflect the unique cultural background and humanism of China and Beijing.
19) Let us work hand in hand to solve this problem
20) We should do our best in eliminating industrial pollution
六.Post-writing:
第一步集中在語法上：
1) 每個句子是否都有謂語動詞;
2) 動詞的時態和語態;
3) 主謂搭配是否恰當;
4) 代詞與其指代的事物是否一致;
5) 標點符號。
第二步在拼寫上
常見錯誤舉例：
1) 無主語
After graduated from university, I began to work in a company.
Do you know why must protect our environment?
Have you seen a man without enough food but had a healthy body?
2) 無主謂結構
For another reason. When we have a vacation, it will be convenient to ride a bike.
Lived in the country, no loud noise, no dirty air, but quiet and fresh.
3) 無連接詞
But a person has not enough food, he will not have a healthy body.
China is a developing country, most people cannot afford a car yet.
4) 主語使用錯誤
Rich doesnt mean a happy life.
Without a friend will feel alone.
However, making friends should be careful.
5) there be用法錯誤
There are many students read books in the classroom.
There are few person can afford a car in our country.
There are many things must be done to deal with energy crisis.
6) 舉例用法錯誤
We should take some sports. For example, football, basketball and so on.
7) 不完全句
Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the College English Test.
8) 分詞使用錯誤
Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
Looking at from above, this picture gives us an image of a lion.
9)單詞用法錯誤
附：重點話題與句型
1) With more emphasis put on building a harmonious society, people begin to realize the importance of solving the problem of inequality
2) Since sustainable development is our main goal, we should pay more attention to striking a balance between economic development and environmental protection
3) As the central task of our country is to build a well-off society in an all-round way, more efforts are being made to improve the living standards of the people
4) With the rapid growth of our economy , an increasing number of problems have arisen, such as
5) With the rapid development of science and technology , more and more people come to realize that
6) Currently, there is a widespread concern over high unemployment rate .
7) Nowadays, a heated debate about private cars is under way in China.
8) As the public awareness of market economy heightens,
9) Unless we put more emphasis on environmental protection , the problem will be a hindrance to our building a harmonious society.
10) Different people hold different views on accession to WTO . Some are in favor of, while others are against
11) The case only reveals the tip of an ugly iceberg of serious environmental pollution
12) When it comes to the problem of eating wild animals
13) As far as family planning is concerned, there is much room for improvement.
14) All these statistics reveal a painful fact that corruption is spreading rapidly in our country
15) Without love, my classmate Xiao Wang would have died in the hospital. But with our love and care, he survived the illness and can enjoy his life now.
16) Without computers , it would be difficult to imagine modern life.
17) It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation
18) The participating Slogan should be an embodiment of the concept of Green Olympics, Hi-Tech Olympics and Peoples Olympics with Peoples Olympics as its highlight and should reflect the unique cultural background and humanism of China and Beijing.
19) Let us work hand in hand to solve this problem
20) We should do our best in eliminating industrial pollution
六.Post-writing:
第一步集中在語法上：
1) 每個句子是否都有謂語動詞;
2) 動詞的時態和語態;
3) 主謂搭配是否恰當;
4) 代詞與其指代的事物是否一致;
5) 標點符號。
第二步在拼寫上
常見錯誤舉例：
1) 無主語
After graduated from university, I began to work in a company.
Do you know why must protect our environment?
Have you seen a man without enough food but had a healthy body?
2) 無主謂結構
For another reason. When we have a vacation, it will be convenient to ride a bike.
Lived in the country, no loud noise, no dirty air, but quiet and fresh.
3) 無連接詞
But a person has not enough food, he will not have a healthy body.
China is a developing country, most people cannot afford a car yet.
4) 主語使用錯誤
Rich doesnt mean a happy life.
Without a friend will feel alone.
However, making friends should be careful.
5) there be用法錯誤
There are many students read books in the classroom.
There are few person can afford a car in our country.
There are many things must be done to deal with energy crisis.
6) 舉例用法錯誤
We should take some sports. For example, football, basketball and so on.
7) 不完全句
Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the College English Test.
8) 分詞使用錯誤
Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
Looking at from above, this picture gives us an image of a lion.
9)單詞用法錯誤
