The World Expo in 2024英文作文

　　The World Expo in 2024

　　Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ur government

　　has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

　　How To Be A Lovely Citizen

　　Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:

　　1)近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)考證熱

　　2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

　　3)你的看法

　　Certificate Craze On Campus

　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)勎覍υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的考證熱分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述我對大學(xué)生考證熱的看法。

　　高分范文

　　Certificate Craze On Campus

　　In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?

　　There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

　　From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.

　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

　　祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為隨意地，隨機(jī)地。

　　限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。

　　that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。

　　設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

　　強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。

　　which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。

　　用于引出我的觀點(diǎn)。

　　當(dāng)談到或提及時(shí)。

　　since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為既然。

　　只是，僅僅。而不是。

　 The World Expo in 2024英文作文

　　The World Expo in 2024

　　Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ur government

　　has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

　　How To Be A Lovely Citizen

　　Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:

　　1)近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)考證熱

　　2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

　　3)你的看法

　　Certificate Craze On Campus

　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)勎覍υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的考證熱分析越來越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述我對大學(xué)生考證熱的看法。

　　高分范文

　　Certificate Craze On Campus

　　In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?

　　There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

　　From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.

　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

　　祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為隨意地，隨機(jī)地。

　　限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。

　　that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。

　　設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

　　強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。

　　which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。

　　用于引出我的觀點(diǎn)。

　　當(dāng)談到或提及時(shí)。

　　since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為既然。

　　只是，僅僅。而不是。