考研英語小作文批改邀請信0-4分例文1
英語復習資料：作文范文批改，在線考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
0-4分
第一篇
Dear Bob，
There will be held a wonderful music concern for piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob，
There will be held (刪除)a wonderful music (音樂會是concert)concern for(改為concerning) piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary(拼寫錯誤，改為January) 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
2分
同學你好，你對模版的理解不透徹，還不清楚每部分要寫的內容，建議你看看論壇上別的同學的作文，了解一下每部分具體要寫什么內容。
英語復習資料：作文范文批改，在線考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
0-4分
第一篇
Dear Bob，
There will be held a wonderful music concern for piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Bob，
There will be held (刪除)a wonderful music (音樂會是concert)concern for(改為concerning) piano and violin in the Musical Hall of the Centre Conservatory Of Music on Junuary(拼寫錯誤，改為January) 15st . We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 7:00 PM on time. This will be followed by a ticket that we have to given you by Express Email Survice before the concern. At around 6:50PM, January 15st, you may arrived to the CCOM because staff is checking our tickets ahead of time.
I really hope you can make it RSVP before 6:50PM,January 15st,2024.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
2分
同學你好，你對模版的理解不透徹，還不清楚每部分要寫的內容，建議你看看論壇上別的同學的作文，了解一下每部分具體要寫什么內容。
