2024屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達限時測驗：6（含解析）
2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習 書面表達限時測驗6（含答案）
1．(2010·吉林長春十一中高三上期中考試)
最近一項調查表明如今中國青年的人生目標比過去要顯得多元化。這種選擇的變化表明社會在進步，人們的生活目標較以前更為實際。
參考上述信息及下表，以“Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today”為標題，寫一篇詞數不少于80的短文。
比例 目標 手段
53.5% 掙錢給自己買一房一車
71.9%的人說將努力拼搏以實現人生的目標
44% 提高生活質量
43.7% 成為富人
23.9% 找一份好工作
參考詞匯：多元化的 diversified; 調查對象：respondent
2．某英語雜志社舉辦“建設節約型校園”征文比賽。請針對目前許多校園內部的浪費現象，寫一篇短文，號召同學們從我做起，杜絕浪費。
浪費現象 危害 建議措施
1.水、電
2.餐廳食物
3.其它（由考生添加） 1.造成支出增加
2.浪費自然資源
3.養成不良習慣 （考生自行發揮）
注意：
1、詞數：100-120詞。
2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3、不要逐字逐條翻譯。
4、標題和第一句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
3．書面表達(25分)
根據下面提示, 以Healthy Diet為題寫一篇120詞左右的短文。
提示：
1. 健康飲食的重要性。
(1)有助于保持健康與正常體重;
(2)有助于保持體力, 精力充沛地進行學習與勞動;
(3)有助于提高生活質量。
2. 什么是健康飲食？
(1)合理的飲食結構;
(2)綠色蔬菜與水果的優越性;
(3)愉快的心情、適量的體育鍛煉與健康的飲食同等重要。________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
4．假設你是李紅,你的一位美國筆友Robert寫E-mail問及你高考后暑假的安排,請根據以下要點,寫一封100詞左右的email回復他, 可以適當增加細節。
1. 學開車 2. 參加英語培訓課程 3. 去北京看奧運會 4. 游覽北京的名勝
注意:1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;3. 詞數:100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數。
Dear Robert,
How time flies!
5．據調查，人們對學生網上交友持不同意見。請以Should students make friends online?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹不同，并表達自己的。
贊成 反對 你的
1．廣交朋友 1．浪費時間
(請考生列舉到點)
2．自由表達思想 2．影響學習
3．利于學習 3．上當受騙
1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數120左右。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在班級和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：網絡朋友 online friends)；上當受騙
Should students make friends online?
Some people say yes.
_________________________________________
參考答案
1．
One possible version:
Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goals as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.
As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.b10
【解析】
2．
Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing dishes. In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s limited resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resource. We must start with ourselves from now on! Then our society will go on developing and our life will bebetter.
【解析】考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題校園內部的浪費現象，
要適當增加細節，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適
的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的
目的。In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
這句話用了過去分詞做賓語補足語句型，So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
這句話是用的虛擬語氣，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。For
example,In my opinion, What is worse等
3．
Healthy Diet
Healthy diet is very important for us, firstly because it helps to keep us fit and have a proper weight; secondly because it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard; finally because it helps to improve the quality of our life.
In order to have a healthy diet, we should first have a reasonable and scientific diet structure which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit, and as little as possible the food high in fat, sugar and salt, which does great harm to our health.
Besides, a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally important to our health as healthy diet.
【解析】略
4．不唯一
Dear Robert:
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
Best wishes!
【解析】
試題分析：考生應不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，信的格式和開頭語已給出，這降低了寫作難度，但同時要注意第二句要接好，這也增加了難度。考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構（2）句子的時態（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。
5．
Should students make friends online?
Some people say yes. The Internet helps students make many friends. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely and even get help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not make online friends. They think it a waste of time to make friends online, which should be spent more meaningfully on their studies. Otherwise, their normal studies will be much affected. Besides, some students may even get cheated online.
From my point of view, making friends online is harmful rather than helpful. Students should think of their study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】略
2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習 書面表達限時測驗6（含答案）
1．(2010·吉林長春十一中高三上期中考試)
最近一項調查表明如今中國青年的人生目標比過去要顯得多元化。這種選擇的變化表明社會在進步，人們的生活目標較以前更為實際。
參考上述信息及下表，以“Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today”為標題，寫一篇詞數不少于80的短文。
比例 目標 手段
53.5% 掙錢給自己買一房一車
71.9%的人說將努力拼搏以實現人生的目標
44% 提高生活質量
43.7% 成為富人
23.9% 找一份好工作
參考詞匯：多元化的 diversified; 調查對象：respondent
2．某英語雜志社舉辦“建設節約型校園”征文比賽。請針對目前許多校園內部的浪費現象，寫一篇短文，號召同學們從我做起，杜絕浪費。
浪費現象 危害 建議措施
1.水、電
2.餐廳食物
3.其它（由考生添加） 1.造成支出增加
2.浪費自然資源
3.養成不良習慣 （考生自行發揮）
注意：
1、詞數：100-120詞。
2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3、不要逐字逐條翻譯。
4、標題和第一句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
3．書面表達(25分)
根據下面提示, 以Healthy Diet為題寫一篇120詞左右的短文。
提示：
1. 健康飲食的重要性。
(1)有助于保持健康與正常體重;
(2)有助于保持體力, 精力充沛地進行學習與勞動;
(3)有助于提高生活質量。
2. 什么是健康飲食？
(1)合理的飲食結構;
(2)綠色蔬菜與水果的優越性;
(3)愉快的心情、適量的體育鍛煉與健康的飲食同等重要。________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
4．假設你是李紅,你的一位美國筆友Robert寫E-mail問及你高考后暑假的安排,請根據以下要點,寫一封100詞左右的email回復他, 可以適當增加細節。
1. 學開車 2. 參加英語培訓課程 3. 去北京看奧運會 4. 游覽北京的名勝
注意:1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;3. 詞數:100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數。
Dear Robert,
How time flies!
5．據調查，人們對學生網上交友持不同意見。請以Should students make friends online?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹不同，并表達自己的。
贊成 反對 你的
1．廣交朋友 1．浪費時間
(請考生列舉到點)
2．自由表達思想 2．影響學習
3．利于學習 3．上當受騙
1．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數120左右。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在班級和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：網絡朋友 online friends)；上當受騙
Should students make friends online?
Some people say yes.
_________________________________________
參考答案
1．
One possible version:
Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goals as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.
As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.b10
【解析】
2．
Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing dishes. In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s limited resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resource. We must start with ourselves from now on! Then our society will go on developing and our life will bebetter.
【解析】考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題校園內部的浪費現象，
要適當增加細節，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適
的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的
目的。In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
這句話用了過去分詞做賓語補足語句型，So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
這句話是用的虛擬語氣，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。For
example,In my opinion, What is worse等
3．
Healthy Diet
Healthy diet is very important for us, firstly because it helps to keep us fit and have a proper weight; secondly because it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard; finally because it helps to improve the quality of our life.
In order to have a healthy diet, we should first have a reasonable and scientific diet structure which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit, and as little as possible the food high in fat, sugar and salt, which does great harm to our health.
Besides, a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally important to our health as healthy diet.
【解析】略
4．不唯一
Dear Robert:
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
Best wishes!
【解析】
試題分析：考生應不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，信的格式和開頭語已給出，這降低了寫作難度，但同時要注意第二句要接好，這也增加了難度。考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構（2）句子的時態（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。
5．
Should students make friends online?
Some people say yes. The Internet helps students make many friends. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely and even get help with their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not make online friends. They think it a waste of time to make friends online, which should be spent more meaningfully on their studies. Otherwise, their normal studies will be much affected. Besides, some students may even get cheated online.
From my point of view, making friends online is harmful rather than helpful. Students should think of their study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】略
