2024屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)復(fù)習(xí)專題03 辯論對比話題指導(dǎo)

　　實例指導(dǎo)1—如何寫好辯論式書面表達(dá)

　　More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it …

　　【寫作思路】

　　本文為辯論式議論文。其格式和結(jié)構(gòu)為：第一段，綜述辯論的內(nèi)容(本文已經(jīng)給出)；第二段，表述正方觀點及理由；第三段，表述反方觀點及理由；第四段，陳述自己的觀點。

　　【寫作指導(dǎo)】

　　Is Training

　　Class

　　Or

　　Family

　　Teacher Necessary?

　　More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some think it necessary．It’s effect view to study with a teacher than by themselves．It can strengthen what is learnt in the class．They can learn a lot more.

　　Some think it unnecessary．Students can easily become dependent．Students need time to relax from time to time．The purpose of many training classes and teachers is making money.

　　h my opinion，if a training class or family teacher is needed depends . If you are really very weak or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste

　　time and money.

　　【教師點評】

　　本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰，要點齊全。時態(tài)使用正確，均用一般現(xiàn)在時。簡單句、復(fù)合句交替使用，非謂語動詞的使用均給本文增色不少。不足之處是兩個觀點的理由部分顯得有些松散，沒有用相關(guān)的過渡詞，此外也出現(xiàn)了一些語法和搭配方面的錯誤。

　　因為后面有than by themselves，所以effective 要用比較級，前面要加上more。

　　in class 意思為“在課堂上”，class前不加冠詞。

　　表示“一些……，一些……”，用some…，others 來表示。

　　④動詞原形不可以作表語，要用to make或making。

　　⑤if應(yīng)改為whether，因為if不可引導(dǎo)主語從句。

　　⑥ be weak at中的at不可以省去，因為后面有賓語a certain subject。

　　【優(yōu)秀范文】

　　Is Training

　　Class

　　Or

　　Family

　　Teacher Necessary?

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends, There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary . For one thing , students can easily become dependent.

　　For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What's more, the purpose of many training classes and family teachers is to make money.

　　Personally, I think, whether a training class or family teacher is needed depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it's OK for you . But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, Otherwise it would be a waste of time and money .

　　實例指導(dǎo)2—是否參加培訓(xùn)班

　　1．對同一件事情，人們常有不同的看法，即正反兩種觀點。在寫這類體裁的作文時，常使用一般現(xiàn)在時。

　　2．寫作的步驟廠般是：提出問題+闡述兩種不同觀點，并舉例說明+總結(jié)自己的觀點。有時題目會要求說出自己的觀點，可在結(jié)尾段加上自己的觀點并簡要說明理由。

　　①Opinions are divided on the questions ./

　　Opinions differ.

　　②Each coin has two sides.

　　③Some people are in favor of

　　the opinion / Others hold the view that...

　　④ Others are against the point. / Others argue the view that… / Some people disagree with that.

　　2．誤點點撥：…a according to their own situation, children decide to attend the training classes.．表達(dá)欠妥，可改為：Whether children attend the trainlng classes should depend on their own situation.

　　3．畫龍點睛：文章中Some people agree with it．和Somepeoplc disagree with it兩個句子，使人感覺語言比較貧乏，可改為：Some people hold the view．和Some people are against the view.

　　【參考范文】

　　Nowadays, many children are sent to attend varieties of training classes by their parents during their holidays. As to this, opinions are mainly divided into two groups.

　　On the one hand, people who are in favor of it hold the view that it is good for children to attend those classes. They think it can make children versatile. At the same time, they believe that attending training classes Would make children more excellent than others. Besides, children can enjoy every day. On the other hand, others are against the view. In their opinion, the burden of study on children is too heavy, so they wouldn't fully master what they have learned in their training classes. What's worse, they haven't enough 'time to take a rest.

　　As far as I am concerned, whether they should attend the training classes depends on children themselves. It is better.to arrange their study according to their own needs and make full use of the holidays.

　　實例指導(dǎo)3―電子游戲

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　中學(xué)生玩電子游戲非常普遍。加入你是班長王軍，你通過在校內(nèi)進(jìn)行調(diào)研，調(diào)查的結(jié)果如下表，現(xiàn)在要求你根據(jù)調(diào)查內(nèi)容，你寫了一個調(diào)查分析報告，寄給報社。(字?jǐn)?shù)120左右)

　　一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為 大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為 調(diào)查后得出結(jié)論

　　中學(xué)生玩電子游戲可以提高反應(yīng)速度，促進(jìn)智力發(fā)展。

　　中學(xué)生花太多時間玩游戲?qū)ι眢w健康和學(xué)習(xí)有害。

　　玩游戲是一種娛樂活動，在有足夠的自制力的情況下，適當(dāng)放松也未嘗不可。

　　【思路點撥】

　　這類文章主要以圖表為主，要求學(xué)生對數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析，要系統(tǒng)、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來含義和內(nèi)容。寫作特點主要有：

　　1）按照對照項目逐項進(jìn)行客觀性描寫。這類作文一般是客觀介紹、解釋或說明事物的異同點，使讀者獲得知識和信息，一般不需要作者發(fā)表個人看法。

　　2）行文的條理性和語言的準(zhǔn)確性，這類文章不單要求行文邏輯嚴(yán)密，語言簡明扼要。切忌含糊其辭、模棱兩可。

　　3）根據(jù)寫作要求說明要比較對象的同點。注意恰當(dāng)使用表示相反或?qū)Ρ汝P(guān)系的銜接詞，使段落和全文的語義連貫。

　　4）本文的時態(tài)應(yīng)，一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時為主。本篇書面表達(dá)描寫時可分以下幾步：

　　Dear editors ,

　　As is shown in the table , computer games have become very popular in recent years. Whenever you go, you can see middle school students playing the games in clubs, stores or at home. Obviously , the game give great pleasure and satisfaction.

　　Some students think that the games can train them to respond to things quickly , improve their mind as well as interesting in science . But the mass think that the students spend too much time playing the games , which certainly does harm to their health and study .

　　In my opinion, computer games are a kind of wonderful entertainment . If you have enough self-control ability , you can get pleasure and benefit from them.

　　Your ,

　　Wang Jun

　　Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is waste① of money. They say that the money could better spend②on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them

　　many pleasures③. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.

　　Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on a ④condition that we have much money. I think a big advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee which ⑤you will make huge profits by buying paintings.

　　So, the best piece of advice I Could give will be -- buy to enjoy!

　　【教師點評】

　　1．總體許價：

　　作者能根據(jù)本文特點進(jìn)行組材， 按照內(nèi)容提示寫出了不同人對于買畫的不同觀點，并發(fā)表了自己的看法，所寫文章符合寫作要求。作者所采用的句式結(jié)構(gòu)靈活多變，全文的表達(dá)也很通順，具有很強的可讀性。美中不足的是文中出現(xiàn)了幾處小錯誤。

　　2．亮點或采分點：

　　用了一些較復(fù)雜句式，如：賓語從句，表語從句和狀語從句等，這些結(jié)構(gòu)的使用提升了文章的檔次。

　　3．錯誤更正：

　　①waste前加a。a waste of意為“浪費”。

　　②better spend改為be better spent。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)，這兒應(yīng)用被動結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　③many pleasures改為much pleasure。pleasure當(dāng)“樂趣”講時，是不可數(shù)名詞。

　　④去掉a。“以……為條件”是on condition that…。

　　⑤which改為出that。guarantee后接的是同位語從句，而不是定語從句。

　　【參考范文】

　　Are Paintings Worth Buying?

　　About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is a waste of money. They say that the money could be better spent on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them much pleasure. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.

　　Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on condition that we have much money, I think a big advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee that you will make huge profits by buying paintings.

　　So, the best piece of advice I could give will be -- buy to enjoy!

　　實例指導(dǎo)5— 如何禮貌地解釋

　　【寫作任務(wù)】

　　加入你是邁克，在一家小的公司上班，現(xiàn)在你打算離開這家公司，請你用150詞左右來給你的老板希爾先生解釋你離開的原因。

　　1. 希望在貿(mào)易方面，能獲得更廣泛的經(jīng)驗。 照顧住在遠(yuǎn)地的年老母親，而申請辭職。 由于希望獲得更高的職位負(fù)更多的責(zé)任，而離開現(xiàn)職。Reasons for leaving

　　Dear Mr. Will ,

　　I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company …

　　Dear Mr. Will ,

　　I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company . With the help of you I have had a good time here , so I really don’t want to leave here , but for some reasons I have to make the decision.

　　Firstly , I think the main reason is that I am determined to get much more experience in trading . After all , our company is still a developing company , and I have not many chances to improve myself in treading .

　　Secondly , I am leaving our company to be with my mother and care for my aged mother in a distant city. She has been very ill for a long time , so she needs looking after very much .

　　Lastly , of course , I want to improve my position and have more responsibility in another company .

　　I wish you can accept my application . Thank you !

　　Yours,

　　【寫作指導(dǎo)首先主題，然后分別說明意見及其理由，最后說出自己的看法和結(jié)論。該文以表格形式出現(xiàn)，討論的話題是地震災(zāi)區(qū)人民是否應(yīng)該接受社會援助。normal quickly. Finally, the aid has brought endless hope to us for one year.

　　However, some students are against it . First , although we suffered a lot from the earthquake ,our spirit is still alive. Besides, it is lucky that we are still alive , so we should do some things that we can . What’s more , in order to get this aid , some people are under great pressure, which has a bad effect on them.

　　In my opinion , we should do the work mainly by ourselves, not simply depending on others. Only in this way can we make our hometown more beautiful with. the aid from society

　　【教師點評】

　　1. 文章結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理。全文分四個自然段。第一自然段提出要討論的問題,再用Different students have different opinions過渡。二、三自然段采用總分式，先點出主題句，然后進(jìn)行說理。第四自然段點出自己觀點。

　　2. 以理服人。由于有以上的結(jié)構(gòu)安排，加上合理發(fā)揮，對于是否接愛社會援助有明確信息。

　　3. 語言生動，具有較強的針對性，這正是對比性文體不可缺少的特點。如第一自然段的過渡句，第三自然段中which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，及結(jié)尾的Only開頭的倒裝句。同時全文使用了許多副詞、形容詞（如possible, quickly, lucky, mainly, simply等）更加強了這種針對性的語氣，而however, in my opinion, only in this way等短語銜接上下文，使全文渾然一體。

　　4.恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用相關(guān)典句，為全文增添了不少亮點。

　　實戰(zhàn)演練

　　自“神九”返回以后，人們就“普通人去太空旅行”的話題展開了熱烈的討論。請你根據(jù)下表的提示，以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel ”為題寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于100字的英語短文，并簡要地發(fā)表你自己的觀點。

　　太空旅行的益處

　　太空旅行的弊端

　　1．提供居住的新場所

　　2．給人類提供新能源

　　3．對人們更好地了解其他領(lǐng)域有好處 1．花費太大

　　2．人類住在其他星球上的想法不切實際

　　3．太空旅行有危險

　　你的看法

　　The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel

　　There are several advantages of space travel . First of all, it could provide man with new places to live and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research is good for other research fields.

　　However, space travel also has some disadvantages. On one hand, it costs too much money which could be spent in other aspects. On the other hand, the idea of people living on other planets is unrealistic. What's more, space travel could be dangerous, too.

　　Nowadays, it has become more and more popular for drivers to talk on the cellphone while driving. But through the survey we did, we found that people have different Opinions about this practice.

　　Among those persons we interviewed, 30% agree with this practice. They say that being a modern means of communication, the cellphone is convenient and fast, especially if you-have something important to say. While the majority surveyed, about 70% are against the practice, saying that it is dangerous to talk on the cellphone while driving, and can cause accidents easily.

　　In my opinion, it would be better for drivers not to use the cellphone while driving for his safety and others'. If they do have something important to say, they should stop to talk.

　　隨著社會的發(fā)展，音樂和我們的生活息息相關(guān)，作為音樂中的一員——搖滾音樂，給人們的生活帶了是好還是壞的影響呢？2007年3月6日我班分為兩

　　March 6th, 2007

　　Fine

　　Today our class had a heated discussion about rock-n-roll in two groups. We realize that, with the development of society, music has been closely connected with people’s life. Rock-n-roll music is a branch of music. But is it good or bad?

　　55% of the students think rock-n-roll music is a kind of popular music that spreads widely throughout the world, reflecting characteristics of the changing times. It is a form of extremely good expressiveness through tunes and words. Not only learned people but also common persons can enjoy it, for it’s a lively way of free communications.

　　However, 45% of the students think that listeners might get too nervous and excited to relax themselves at the thrilling music. What’s more, lacking cultural context often makes it hard for it to stand long tasting.