2024廣西柳江縣高考英語(二輪)短文改錯實效訓練（4）

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　students

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors

　　or

　　first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take

　　in

　　possible

　　their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the

　　believe

　　environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from

　　graduating或加who

　　leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to

　　choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a

　　cannot或can’t或后加not

　　good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if

　　we

　　a

　　【2024模擬題】第一節

　　短文改錯 ( 共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　短文改錯

　　1. 去掉for

　　2. the –her

　　3. similarly—similar

　　4. he—she

　　5. interesting—interested

　　6. Beside—Besides

　　7. such后加a

　　8. Whichever—whatever

　　9. believed—believe

　　10. learning--learn

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【參考答案】5.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　短文改錯。

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意： 1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

　　with

　　school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of

　　the

　　full

　　every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

　　her

　　allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

　　be

　　study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.

　　eyes

　　In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

　　watching

　　work

　　Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at

　　has

　　刪除at

　　abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤，對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）；則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,

　　66.

　　the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring ??????? 67.

　　Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world??? ?????but could make the most delicious dishes．One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner．As I was????????about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in ?????? 71.

　　the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It????? ?isn't a good time to do that, dear．' At once I apologize??????and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You???? ????know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．"????? 6.boy前加a

　　67.去掉when

　　68.cooker改為cook

　　69.but改為and

　　70.√

　　71.about后加to

　　72.Shake改為Shaking

　　73.apologize改為apologized

　　74.me改為myself

　　75.month改為months

　　2024廣西柳江縣高考英語(二輪)短文改錯實效訓練（4）

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.

　　students

　　Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors

　　or

　　first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take

　　in

　　possible

　　their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the

　　believe

　　environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from

　　graduating或加who

　　leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to

　　choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a

　　cannot或can’t或后加not

　　good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if

　　we

　　a

　　【2024模擬題】第一節

　　短文改錯 ( 共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　短文改錯

　　1. 去掉for

　　2. the –her

　　3. similarly—similar

　　4. he—she

　　5. interesting—interested

　　6. Beside—Besides

　　7. such后加a

　　8. Whichever—whatever

　　9. believed—believe

　　10. learning--learn

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for

　　everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Please give me some advices.

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　【參考答案】5.

　　Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she

　　dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me

　　disliked

　　She

　　be

　　because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem

　　friendly

　　is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?

　　Or

　　Please give me some advices.

　　advice

　　Yours,

　　Mary

　　短文改錯。

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意： 1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　【參考答案】6.

　　I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

　　with

　　school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of

　　the

　　full

　　every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

　　her

　　allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

　　be

　　study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.

　　eyes

　　In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

　　watching

　　work

　　Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at

　　has

　　刪除at

　　abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤，對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤）；則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,

　　66.

　　the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring ??????? 67.

　　Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world??? ?????but could make the most delicious dishes．One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner．As I was????????about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in ?????? 71.

　　the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, ‘It????? ?isn't a good time to do that, dear．' At once I apologize??????and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You???? ????know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．"????? 6.boy前加a

　　67.去掉when

　　68.cooker改為cook

　　69.but改為and

　　70.√

　　71.about后加to

　　72.Shake改為Shaking

　　73.apologize改為apologized

　　74.me改為myself

　　75.month改為months