2024屆高考一輪復習英語同步練習：短文改錯練習（1）
2024高考英語：短文改錯練習（1）及答案
D1 短文改錯記敘文
【英語卷(解析）·2024屆浙江省溫州市十校聯合體（溫州中學等）高三上學期期初聯考（202408）】第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分1 0分）
下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤，請在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不給分。
It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
【答案】【】
【】
【】1. It→As
正如我們看見的，現在中國越來越多的人擁有手機。這里是非限制性定語從句，用As引導。
2. millions→million ?到2002年底，有2千萬的手機用戶。數詞后面加million
3.a→the到2005年，這個數字到了3千萬。這里是特指“手機用戶的數量”，a→the
4.convenience→convenient人們發現手機很方便，使用find +賓語+形容詞：convenience→convenient
5. to ---with
get in touch with sb ,與某人取得聯系。
6. meeting→meet有不同的功能滿足不同的需求。這里是不定式做目的狀語
7. surf→surfing such as后面接動名詞： surf→surfing
8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an
9.our前加to手機的輻射會對我們的健康造成傷害。Do harm to“對…造成傷害”，our前加to
10.are→is?擁有手機的人的數量還在穩定上升。主語是the number of…，謂語是單數：are→is
第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文
【文章綜述】講述一個人騎馬到了一個餐館，又冷又濕，想一個辦法讓自己取暖的故事。
【答案解析】
76. rain前加the
考查形容詞。In the rain在雨中；
77.coldly → cold
考查形容詞。句意：又冷又濕，他非常想溫暖一下自己。Cold形容詞做伴隨狀語。
78.去掉and
考查句子結構。And應該連接兩個句子，但wet and cold只是伴隨狀語，故去年掉and.
79. too → so
考查固定結構。句意：然而這個餐館如何擁擠以至于不能靠近火源。So …that 如此以至于。
80. Taking → Take
考查祈使句。句意：給我的馬一些魚。
81. didn’t → doesn’t
考查動詞的時態。句意：對不起，先生，馬不會吃魚。表示客觀事實，故用一般現在時。
82. surprising → surprised考查形容詞。句意：許多人對這個奇怪的菜單感到很吃驚。修飾人用surprised。
83. whom → them
考查代詞。句意：為了看看馬吃魚，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人們。
84. besides → beside
考查介詞。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁邊開始暖和。
85. warm前加to或warm → warming考查動詞的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 開始做某事。
短文改錯
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our
76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety
77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To
78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our
79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like,
80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in
81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make
82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through
83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention
84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.
85 ________
【參考答案】76. 去掉第二個in.
77. 正確.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise.
80. 去掉the
81. in---into
82. had---have.
83. ways—way
84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That
76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I
77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except
78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted.
79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had
80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked
81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for
82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for
83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well
84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.
85.________
【參考答案】76. 去掉her
77.
whenever → when
78. to
→
with
79. well ∧ as
80. of → for
81.
√
82. 去掉第二個 to
83. them → us
84. until → before
85.
can →
could
第四部分：寫作（共兩節，滿分35分）
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【參考答案】
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
短文改錯
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break
76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary.
77. _____
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired.
78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get
79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest,
80. ______
instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that
81. _______
will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased.
82. ______
I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat
83. ______
with my classmates or just take a walk during the break.
84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.
85. ______
【參考答案】
take---taking.
77.class—classes.
78.or—and.
79. did—do.
80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired.
82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正確。
85. freshly---fresh.
【短文改錯】
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____
see that there is anything on their website 7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___
forward to seeing you again.
【參考答案】KEY 6
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
2024高考英語：短文改錯練習（1）及答案
D1 短文改錯記敘文
【英語卷(解析）·2024屆浙江省溫州市十校聯合體（溫州中學等）高三上學期期初聯考（202408）】第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分1 0分）
下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤，請在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不給分。
It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.
【答案】【】
【】
【】1. It→As
正如我們看見的，現在中國越來越多的人擁有手機。這里是非限制性定語從句，用As引導。
2. millions→million ?到2002年底，有2千萬的手機用戶。數詞后面加million
3.a→the到2005年，這個數字到了3千萬。這里是特指“手機用戶的數量”，a→the
4.convenience→convenient人們發現手機很方便，使用find +賓語+形容詞：convenience→convenient
5. to ---with
get in touch with sb ,與某人取得聯系。
6. meeting→meet有不同的功能滿足不同的需求。這里是不定式做目的狀語
7. surf→surfing such as后面接動名詞： surf→surfing
8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an
9.our前加to手機的輻射會對我們的健康造成傷害。Do harm to“對…造成傷害”，our前加to
10.are→is?擁有手機的人的數量還在穩定上升。主語是the number of…，謂語是單數：are→is
第一節：短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind, just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
【答案】【知識點】D1 短文改錯記敘文
【文章綜述】講述一個人騎馬到了一個餐館，又冷又濕，想一個辦法讓自己取暖的故事。
【答案解析】
76. rain前加the
考查形容詞。In the rain在雨中；
77.coldly → cold
考查形容詞。句意：又冷又濕，他非常想溫暖一下自己。Cold形容詞做伴隨狀語。
78.去掉and
考查句子結構。And應該連接兩個句子，但wet and cold只是伴隨狀語，故去年掉and.
79. too → so
考查固定結構。句意：然而這個餐館如何擁擠以至于不能靠近火源。So …that 如此以至于。
80. Taking → Take
考查祈使句。句意：給我的馬一些魚。
81. didn’t → doesn’t
考查動詞的時態。句意：對不起，先生，馬不會吃魚。表示客觀事實，故用一般現在時。
82. surprising → surprised考查形容詞。句意：許多人對這個奇怪的菜單感到很吃驚。修飾人用surprised。
83. whom → them
考查代詞。句意：為了看看馬吃魚，所有的人都跑出去了。Them代指的是人們。
84. besides → beside
考查介詞。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁邊開始暖和。
85. warm前加to或warm → warming考查動詞的用法。Begin to do 或begin doing 開始做某事。
短文改錯
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our
76 ________
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety
77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To
78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our
79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like,
80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in
81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make
82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through
83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention
84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.
85 ________
【參考答案】76. 去掉第二個in.
77. 正確.
78. showed—showing 或showed---which showed.
79. surprised—surprise.
80. 去掉the
81. in---into
82. had---have.
83. ways—way
84. what—that或去掉what. 85. protect后加it.
There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That
76.________
was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I
77.________
once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except
78.________
one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted.
79.________
It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had
80.________
her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked
81.________
us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for
82.________
an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for
83.________
school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well
84.________
because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.
85.________
【參考答案】76. 去掉her
77.
whenever → when
78. to
→
with
79. well ∧ as
80. of → for
81.
√
82. 去掉第二個 to
83. them → us
84. until → before
85.
can →
could
第四部分：寫作（共兩節，滿分35分）
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【參考答案】
I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
短文改錯
As students, we have classes from early morning
till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break
76. _____
between class is definitely important, even necessary.
77. _____
Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired.
78. ______
During the ten-minute break we did something to get
79. ______
rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest,
80. ______
instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that
81. _______
will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased.
82. ______
I usually do some simple exercises. Sometime I have a free chat
83. ______
with my classmates or just take a walk during the break.
84. ______
When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.
85. ______
【參考答案】
take---taking.
77.class—classes.
78.or—and.
79. did—do.
80. real---a real
81. tired—more tired.
82. pleased—pleasing.
83. Sometime—Sometimes.
84. 正確。
85. freshly---fresh.
【短文改錯】
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___
are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____
see that there is anything on their website 7____
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___
forward to seeing you again.
【參考答案】KEY 6
Dear Anish,
Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___
It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___
has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__
or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___
I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__
are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__
see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__
I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___
when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_
has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_
forward to seeing you again.
