浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（1）第二節(jié)

　　書面表達(dá)(滿分分)

　　目前，食品安全問題引起了人們的廠泛關(guān)注。一些生產(chǎn)廠商為了降低成本追求利潤，缺乏足夠的安全措施，致使一些劣質(zhì)或有害食品流市場，對人們的健康產(chǎn)生極大的危害。請你就此事給一家英文報刊寫封信，談?wù)剛€人看法并呼吁整個社會關(guān)注此事。

　　要求：詞數(shù)10左右。(不包括所給內(nèi)容)

　　參考詞匯：利潤：profit；安全措施：safety measures Dear Sir,

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　With the rapid development of society, great changes have been taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in crowded houses. When they went out , they had to walk and go by bike. Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and the other modern equipment. People can often travel with train or plane. You can see high buildings everywhere. The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. No one can imagined what a great change we will have.

　　（第一行去掉been, 第二行把them改為it，第三行把live改為lived，把a(bǔ)nd改為or，第四行把more改為much或去掉，第五行把machine改為machines，并去掉the，把with改為by，第六行把prefers改為prefer，最后一行把imagined改為imagine）

　　書面表達(dá)

　　A possible version

　　Dear Sir, w*w*w*k*s*5*u*c*o*m

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays. In order to reduce the cost and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing a lot of harm to consumers' health.

　　In my opinion, food is essential to human beings. We can not live without proper food. If no notice were taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation would suffer. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（1）第二節(jié)

　　書面表達(dá)(滿分分)

　　目前，食品安全問題引起了人們的廠泛關(guān)注。一些生產(chǎn)廠商為了降低成本追求利潤，缺乏足夠的安全措施，致使一些劣質(zhì)或有害食品流市場，對人們的健康產(chǎn)生極大的危害。請你就此事給一家英文報刊寫封信，談?wù)剛€人看法并呼吁整個社會關(guān)注此事。

　　要求：詞數(shù)10左右。(不包括所給內(nèi)容)

　　參考詞匯：利潤：profit；安全措施：safety measures Dear Sir,

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　With the rapid development of society, great changes have been taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in crowded houses. When they went out , they had to walk and go by bike. Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and the other modern equipment. People can often travel with train or plane. You can see high buildings everywhere. The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. No one can imagined what a great change we will have.

　　（第一行去掉been, 第二行把them改為it，第三行把live改為lived，把a(bǔ)nd改為or，第四行把more改為much或去掉，第五行把machine改為machines，并去掉the，把with改為by，第六行把prefers改為prefer，最后一行把imagined改為imagine）

　　書面表達(dá)

　　A possible version

　　Dear Sir, w*w*w*k*s*5*u*c*o*m

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays. In order to reduce the cost and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing a lot of harm to consumers' health.

　　In my opinion, food is essential to human beings. We can not live without proper food. If no notice were taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation would suffer. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua