高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達42

　　江蘇省南京市、鹽城市2024屆高三第一次模擬考試英語試題請閱讀下面背景材料，并根據問題，用英語寫一篇作文向學校英文報投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2024, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2024, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數150左右。開頭己給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【參考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【寫作指導】

　　本文是材料作文，根據所給的材料，說明這種現象的潛在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的觀點是什么。注意時態用的是一般現在時。恰當地使用連接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。

　　海南省2024屆高三高考預測金卷 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25 分） 假如你是李華，最近你在瀏覽一個新西蘭中學網站時，看到一位名叫Tom的中學生的留言，他計劃在暑假期間到中國的北京旅游，希望能有一名中國留學生做他的導游。你對此很感興趣，請根據以下要點提示寫一封e－mail給他，介紹你的相關情況。

　　主要內容包括 ：1.希望做他的導游；2.打算如何給他做導游；3.期盼他的回復。

　　注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可適當增加情節，以使行文連貫；3. 信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】書面表達：：

　　With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.

　　Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.

　　In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

　　福建省莆田一中2024屆高三高考考前模擬 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分2分）如今, 中國的許多城市出現了跳廣場舞的熱潮, 對于這個現象, 人們褒貶不一。請根據以下提示, 用英語給報社寫一篇報道。

　　大部分人贊成, 認為是一種健康的活動,省錢；

　　一些人反對, 認為影響他人的休息, 有噪音污染；

　　你的看法。

　　注意：1. 詞數120左右2. 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。

　　Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.

　　To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.

　　In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified?recreation centers for people.

　　2024年高考真題——英語（廣東A卷）【題文】閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.

　　The money was i …

　　me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.

　　Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

　　[寫作內容]

　　1用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　2.用約120個詞就Miss McCarty的捐助談談你的想法，內容包括：

　　（1）你如何看待她的捐助行為；

　　（2）你認為她的捐助對受惠學生有哪些影響；

　　（3）如果你自己要捐助，你會選擇哪個群體并陳述理由。

　　[寫作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2.作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[評分標準]

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

　　【答案】

　　Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.

　　Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.

　　From where I stand, not only will the lady's generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.

　　Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers' souls as well.

　　To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考點】考察任務型寫作

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文要求首先敘述短文內容：別人眼里很貧窮的卻為別人捐了$ 150,000。該部分一定要簡潔扼要，不要使用過多的復雜句式，容易超過字數限制。

　　然后就如何看待她的捐助行為，捐助行為的影響，以及如果你捐助，你會選擇什么群體，分別展開闡述。本文使用一般現在時，在談自己的看法時使用第一人稱。考生可以以自己的親身經歷為例進行詳細說明。

　　本文給考生自由發揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

　　山東省泰安市2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　【題文】

　　假設你是高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Sam來信詢問你目前如何進行高效復習的。請根據以下要點，結合自身實際寫封回信。

　　1．學習方面：科學規劃，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加強鍛煉，健康飲食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．詞數120—150左右；

　　2．開頭語和結尾語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　3．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。

　　高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達42

　　江蘇省南京市、鹽城市2024屆高三第一次模擬考試英語試題請閱讀下面背景材料，并根據問題，用英語寫一篇作文向學校英文報投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2024, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2024, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數150左右。開頭己給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　3. 參考詞犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【參考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【寫作指導】

　　本文是材料作文，根據所給的材料，說明這種現象的潛在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的觀點是什么。注意時態用的是一般現在時。恰當地使用連接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。

　　海南省2024屆高三高考預測金卷 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分25 分） 假如你是李華，最近你在瀏覽一個新西蘭中學網站時，看到一位名叫Tom的中學生的留言，他計劃在暑假期間到中國的北京旅游，希望能有一名中國留學生做他的導游。你對此很感興趣，請根據以下要點提示寫一封e－mail給他，介紹你的相關情況。

　　主要內容包括 ：1.希望做他的導游；2.打算如何給他做導游；3.期盼他的回復。

　　注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可適當增加情節，以使行文連貫；3. 信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】書面表達：：

　　With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.

　　Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.

　　In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

　　福建省莆田一中2024屆高三高考考前模擬 英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分2分）如今, 中國的許多城市出現了跳廣場舞的熱潮, 對于這個現象, 人們褒貶不一。請根據以下提示, 用英語給報社寫一篇報道。

　　大部分人贊成, 認為是一種健康的活動,省錢；

　　一些人反對, 認為影響他人的休息, 有噪音污染；

　　你的看法。

　　注意：1. 詞數120左右2. 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。

　　Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.

　　To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.

　　In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified?recreation centers for people.

　　2024年高考真題——英語（廣東A卷）【題文】閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.

　　The money was i …

　　me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.

　　Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

　　[寫作內容]

　　1用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　2.用約120個詞就Miss McCarty的捐助談談你的想法，內容包括：

　　（1）你如何看待她的捐助行為；

　　（2）你認為她的捐助對受惠學生有哪些影響；

　　（3）如果你自己要捐助，你會選擇哪個群體并陳述理由。

　　[寫作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2.作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[評分標準]

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

　　【答案】

　　Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.

　　Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.

　　From where I stand, not only will the lady's generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.

　　Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers' souls as well.

　　To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考點】考察任務型寫作

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文要求首先敘述短文內容：別人眼里很貧窮的卻為別人捐了$ 150,000。該部分一定要簡潔扼要，不要使用過多的復雜句式，容易超過字數限制。

　　然后就如何看待她的捐助行為，捐助行為的影響，以及如果你捐助，你會選擇什么群體，分別展開闡述。本文使用一般現在時，在談自己的看法時使用第一人稱。考生可以以自己的親身經歷為例進行詳細說明。

　　本文給考生自由發揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

　　山東省泰安市2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題

　　【題文】

　　假設你是高三學生李華，你的美國筆友Sam來信詢問你目前如何進行高效復習的。請根據以下要點，結合自身實際寫封回信。

　　1．學習方面：科學規劃，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加強鍛煉，健康飲食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．詞數120—150左右；

　　2．開頭語和結尾語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　3．適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧點撥】

　　主意審題，審清內容，時態，確定主題；

　　一定要使用亮點句型，重要語法現象，如：非謂語動詞，從句，倒裝句等；

　　恰當使用連接詞，讓上下文更加連貫；

　　注意卷面整潔，書寫標準。