2024屆高考英語二輪專題訓練書面表達：5
高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達5
2024年高考真題——英語（廣東A卷）【題文】你接受一項寫作任務，要為當地英語晚報寫一篇報道。
［寫作內容］
請根據以下信息寫一篇英文報道，內容包括：
人物：英國人查理德·阿維斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
時間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義
相關信息：
借助當地媒體尋找
迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家
職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等
計劃40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
打算根據此經歷寫一本書
同年同月同日生的人：time twin
［寫作要求］
只能用5個句子表達全部內容
［評分標準］
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
【答案】
【參考范文】
Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.
【解析】
解析：
【考點】考察提綱類短文
【寫作指導】
本文屬于提綱類短文，敘述尋找同年同月同日生的人的Richard Avis所做事情的具體信息。使用第三人稱和一般現在時為主（在敘述過去發生的事情時使用一般過去時）。要點：人物：英國人查理德·阿維斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；時間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義：借助當地媒體尋找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家；職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等；計劃40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根據此經歷寫一本書
提綱類書面表達主要特點是：要點明確，范圍具體，貼近生活，易于動筆。此類試題中有較多的文字說明，實際上規定了考生表述的思路，對考生的寫作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規定的要點一個也不能回避。考生極易受中文提綱的制約，將書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結構和語匯上的單調，因此平時要多練習，活用語言，使文章流暢。
【一句多譯】
借助當地媒體尋找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家；職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等；
（1）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.
（2）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.
山西省康杰中學、長治二中、臨汾一中、忻州一中2024屆高三上學期第一次聯考英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是新華中學高三學生李華，進入高三后你的朋友William感到壓力很大，學習效果甚微，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學習效率。
內容要點：
1. 快樂學習，保持愉快的心情；
2. 積極參加體育活動，聽聽歌曲音樂；
3. 多與同學交流，互相鼓勵。
注意：
1. 開頭和結尾已經為你寫好,詞數100詞左右。
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】寫作
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourge us to overcome difficulties in our study.
Hope these can benefit you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
河南省淅川縣第二高級中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題
【題文】
現在你們的學習任務越來越重，最近你班就“高三學生是否應該減少體育活動”的話題展開討論。下表是討論的具體內容和雙方的觀點。請根據表中所提供的信息寫篇作文介紹討論的情況并闡明自己的觀點。
? 大多數同學認為 少數同學認為
觀?點 不應該減少 應該減少
理?由 1、??參加體育活動可以調節身心、減輕壓力。
2、??學習固然重要，但身體健康是前提。 1、?
放在學習上。
2、?
注意：1、詞數120左右
2、參考詞匯：relax使……放松；
refresh使……恢復精力；
relieve減輕。
We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Possible version 1 :
We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.
The majority of the students think that we shouldn’t cut down the time for sports. Sports are a good way for us to relax and refresh ourselves. In the meanwhile, they think sports can reliever all kinds of pressure. In addition, good health is the first thing, though study is very important. No good health, no study.
However, some other students think that the time for sports should be cut down, because the time for their study is too limited. In their opinion, every minute should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make some students tired, which will affect their study.
Personally, I think we should concentrate most of our energies on study and take exercise at the same time. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.
Possible version 2:
Recently the topic whether we Senior 3 students should cut down the time for sports has aroused wide concern among the students. As to this, opinions vary from person to person..
The majority of the students hold the view that we shouldn’t, claiming that sports are a good way to relax and refresh themselves. Meanwhile, different kinds of pressure can be relieved through sports. More importantly, good health is the guarantee of study. No good health, no study.
However, some other students think otherwise. For them, the time for study is not enough. Therefore, every minute is valuable and should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make them tired, which will affect their study in a degree.
Personally, I’m in favor of the first view and we shouldn’t ignore exercise while studying attentively. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.
廣東省惠州市2024屆高三第二次調研考試英語試題
【題文】閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文“When should I begin to acquire good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher.
“How old are you?” asked the teacher.
“Eight years old, sir.”answered the boy.
“Then you have just lost eight years,” the teacher replied.
There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.
Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one’s teeth in the morning, for instance, keeps one’s teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking one’s tongue out, biting one’s fingernails and picking one’s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being with us, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant.
It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age shape our character. Habits are like tributaries(支流) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person’s character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.
【寫作內容】
1.以約30個詞概括本文內容；
以約120個詞談談你對好習慣養成的看法，并包括以下要點：
（1）你認為好習慣重要嗎，為什么？
（2）你身上有哪些好習慣，它們對你的學習或生活有什么影響。
（3）怎樣才能養成良好的習慣。
【寫作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.
I can’t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character, increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around you. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit.
As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didn’t dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.
Then how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep urging yourself. It may take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!
【解析】解析：考查學生的綜合語言概括能力。本文主要講述好習慣的重要性，并寫出自己身上的好習慣和養成好習慣的方法。學生喜聞樂見，容易一氣呵成。
安徽省淮南市第九中學2024屆高三上學期入學摸底考試英語
【題文】寫作（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，準備參加學校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文，主要內容包括：
1.樂觀的人生態度；2努力學習；3參加體育鍛煉。
生詞：態度 attitude
注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
(One possible version)
【解析】
特點：主題引入自然流暢，能讓學生迅速進入情境，找到感覺。要點明確，段落清晰；與學生生活貼近，有話可說，有話能說。
限定大方向的同時，給學生比較充足的聯想和自由發揮的空間。
本文主題明確，同時需要一定的聯想，難度適中。
文章應包含以下要點:
1.樂觀的人生態度；2.努力學習；3.參加體育鍛煉。
【答案】
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.
If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達5
2024年高考真題——英語（廣東A卷）【題文】你接受一項寫作任務，要為當地英語晚報寫一篇報道。
［寫作內容］
請根據以下信息寫一篇英文報道，內容包括：
人物：英國人查理德·阿維斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
時間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義
相關信息：
借助當地媒體尋找
迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家
職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等
計劃40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
打算根據此經歷寫一本書
同年同月同日生的人：time twin
［寫作要求］
只能用5個句子表達全部內容
［評分標準］
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
【答案】
【參考范文】
Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.
【解析】
解析：
【考點】考察提綱類短文
【寫作指導】
本文屬于提綱類短文，敘述尋找同年同月同日生的人的Richard Avis所做事情的具體信息。使用第三人稱和一般現在時為主（在敘述過去發生的事情時使用一般過去時）。要點：人物：英國人查理德·阿維斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；時間：2011年開始在世界各地尋找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含義：借助當地媒體尋找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家；職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等；計劃40歲生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根據此經歷寫一本書
提綱類書面表達主要特點是：要點明確，范圍具體，貼近生活，易于動筆。此類試題中有較多的文字說明，實際上規定了考生表述的思路，對考生的寫作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規定的要點一個也不能回避。考生極易受中文提綱的制約，將書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結構和語匯上的單調，因此平時要多練習，活用語言，使文章流暢。
【一句多譯】
借助當地媒體尋找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，來自13個國家；職業包括政府官員、運動員、司機、教師、藝術家等；
（1）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.
（2）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.
山西省康杰中學、長治二中、臨汾一中、忻州一中2024屆高三上學期第一次聯考英語
【題文】書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是新華中學高三學生李華，進入高三后你的朋友William感到壓力很大，學習效果甚微，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學習效率。
內容要點：
1. 快樂學習，保持愉快的心情；
2. 積極參加體育活動，聽聽歌曲音樂；
3. 多與同學交流，互相鼓勵。
注意：
1. 開頭和結尾已經為你寫好,詞數100詞左右。
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】寫作
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourge us to overcome difficulties in our study.
Hope these can benefit you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
河南省淅川縣第二高級中學2024屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題
【題文】
現在你們的學習任務越來越重，最近你班就“高三學生是否應該減少體育活動”的話題展開討論。下表是討論的具體內容和雙方的觀點。請根據表中所提供的信息寫篇作文介紹討論的情況并闡明自己的觀點。
? 大多數同學認為 少數同學認為
觀?點 不應該減少 應該減少
理?由 1、??參加體育活動可以調節身心、減輕壓力。
2、??學習固然重要，但身體健康是前提。 1、?
放在學習上。
2、?
注意：1、詞數120左右
2、參考詞匯：relax使……放松；
refresh使……恢復精力；
relieve減輕。
We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Possible version 1 :
We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.
The majority of the students think that we shouldn’t cut down the time for sports. Sports are a good way for us to relax and refresh ourselves. In the meanwhile, they think sports can reliever all kinds of pressure. In addition, good health is the first thing, though study is very important. No good health, no study.
However, some other students think that the time for sports should be cut down, because the time for their study is too limited. In their opinion, every minute should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make some students tired, which will affect their study.
Personally, I think we should concentrate most of our energies on study and take exercise at the same time. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.
Possible version 2:
Recently the topic whether we Senior 3 students should cut down the time for sports has aroused wide concern among the students. As to this, opinions vary from person to person..
The majority of the students hold the view that we shouldn’t, claiming that sports are a good way to relax and refresh themselves. Meanwhile, different kinds of pressure can be relieved through sports. More importantly, good health is the guarantee of study. No good health, no study.
However, some other students think otherwise. For them, the time for study is not enough. Therefore, every minute is valuable and should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make them tired, which will affect their study in a degree.
Personally, I’m in favor of the first view and we shouldn’t ignore exercise while studying attentively. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.
廣東省惠州市2024屆高三第二次調研考試英語試題
【題文】閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文“When should I begin to acquire good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher.
“How old are you?” asked the teacher.
“Eight years old, sir.”answered the boy.
“Then you have just lost eight years,” the teacher replied.
There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.
Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one’s teeth in the morning, for instance, keeps one’s teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking one’s tongue out, biting one’s fingernails and picking one’s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being with us, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant.
It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age shape our character. Habits are like tributaries(支流) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person’s character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.
【寫作內容】
1.以約30個詞概括本文內容；
以約120個詞談談你對好習慣養成的看法，并包括以下要點：
（1）你認為好習慣重要嗎，為什么？
（2）你身上有哪些好習慣，它們對你的學習或生活有什么影響。
（3）怎樣才能養成良好的習慣。
【寫作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫。
The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.
I can’t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character, increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around you. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit.
As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didn’t dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.
Then how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep urging yourself. It may take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!
【解析】解析：考查學生的綜合語言概括能力。本文主要講述好習慣的重要性，并寫出自己身上的好習慣和養成好習慣的方法。學生喜聞樂見，容易一氣呵成。
安徽省淮南市第九中學2024屆高三上學期入學摸底考試英語
【題文】寫作（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，準備參加學校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文，主要內容包括：
1.樂觀的人生態度；2努力學習；3參加體育鍛煉。
生詞：態度 attitude
注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
(One possible version)
【解析】
特點：主題引入自然流暢，能讓學生迅速進入情境，找到感覺。要點明確，段落清晰；與學生生活貼近，有話可說，有話能說。
限定大方向的同時，給學生比較充足的聯想和自由發揮的空間。
本文主題明確，同時需要一定的聯想，難度適中。
文章應包含以下要點:
1.樂觀的人生態度；2.努力學習；3.參加體育鍛煉。
【答案】
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.
If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.
