編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據(jù)真題來進行練習寫作了。

　　The following is a letter to the head of the tourism bureau on the island of Tria.

　　Erosion of beach sand along the shores of Tria Island is a serious threat to our island and our tourist industry. In order to stop the erosion, we should charge people for using the beaches. Although this solution may annoy a few tourists in the short term, it will raise money for replenishing the sand. Replenishing the sand, as was done to protect buildings on the nearby island of Batia, will help protect buildings along our shores, thereby reducing these buildings risk of additional damage from severe storms. And since beaches and buildings in the area will be preserved, Tria s tourist industry will improve over the long term.

　　Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

　　中文翻譯：

　　T島海岸的E沙灘的侵蝕對于我們島和我們的旅游業(yè)是個嚴重的威脅。為阻止侵蝕，我們應該對使用海灘的人收費。盡管這一解決方案會在短期內(nèi)觸怒少量游客，它將會減少使用海灘的人數(shù)并增加補充沙子的資金。象臨近的Batia島一樣補充沙子將會有助于對我們沿岸建筑的保護，從而減少這些房屋在大風暴中受損的危險。由于房屋和海灘將會受到保護，所以T島地區(qū)的旅游業(yè)將會在長遠得到發(fā)展。

　　編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據(jù)真題來進行練習寫作了。

　　The following is a letter to the head of the tourism bureau on the island of Tria.

　　Erosion of beach sand along the shores of Tria Island is a serious threat to our island and our tourist industry. In order to stop the erosion, we should charge people for using the beaches. Although this solution may annoy a few tourists in the short term, it will raise money for replenishing the sand. Replenishing the sand, as was done to protect buildings on the nearby island of Batia, will help protect buildings along our shores, thereby reducing these buildings risk of additional damage from severe storms. And since beaches and buildings in the area will be preserved, Tria s tourist industry will improve over the long term.

　　Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

　　中文翻譯：

　　T島海岸的E沙灘的侵蝕對于我們島和我們的旅游業(yè)是個嚴重的威脅。為阻止侵蝕，我們應該對使用海灘的人收費。盡管這一解決方案會在短期內(nèi)觸怒少量游客，它將會減少使用海灘的人數(shù)并增加補充沙子的資金。象臨近的Batia島一樣補充沙子將會有助于對我們沿岸建筑的保護，從而減少這些房屋在大風暴中受損的危險。由于房屋和海灘將會受到保護，所以T島地區(qū)的旅游業(yè)將會在長遠得到發(fā)展。