沖刺六級寫作高分常見錯誤6
5. 邏輯域錯誤。這個應(yīng)該不難判斷，但還是經(jīng)常出錯：
If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]
其他：
語義重復(fù)
In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說話人的觀點，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]
share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復(fù)，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]
論斷過于絕對，缺乏足夠思考
A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個程度]
句義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化
Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說了]
連詞錯誤
It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應(yīng)該是that，不過更通順的說法應(yīng)該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]
不會使用照應(yīng)語
We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應(yīng)該是同指關(guān)系，后面的other people應(yīng)改為them才對]
作文是對語言的綜合運用，可以集中體現(xiàn)出學(xué)習(xí)者的基本功和思維能力;語感非常重要，不過要形成好的語感還需要長期的反復(fù)訓(xùn)練。過去指導(dǎo)英語專業(yè)大四學(xué)生畢業(yè)論文，每屆都發(fā)現(xiàn)有不少已經(jīng)過了TEM8的英語專業(yè)學(xué)生的語言能力有明顯缺陷。寫作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無數(shù)次練習(xí)的基礎(chǔ)上，對此曾對學(xué)生反復(fù)講過多次，不過由于無法立竿見影，多數(shù)學(xué)生不能很好地堅持，很是遺憾。
5. 邏輯域錯誤。這個應(yīng)該不難判斷，但還是經(jīng)常出錯：
If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]
其他：
語義重復(fù)
In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說話人的觀點，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]
share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復(fù)，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]
論斷過于絕對，缺乏足夠思考
A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個程度]
句義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化
Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說了]
連詞錯誤
It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應(yīng)該是that，不過更通順的說法應(yīng)該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]
不會使用照應(yīng)語
We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應(yīng)該是同指關(guān)系，后面的other people應(yīng)改為them才對]
作文是對語言的綜合運用，可以集中體現(xiàn)出學(xué)習(xí)者的基本功和思維能力;語感非常重要，不過要形成好的語感還需要長期的反復(fù)訓(xùn)練。過去指導(dǎo)英語專業(yè)大四學(xué)生畢業(yè)論文，每屆都發(fā)現(xiàn)有不少已經(jīng)過了TEM8的英語專業(yè)學(xué)生的語言能力有明顯缺陷。寫作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無數(shù)次練習(xí)的基礎(chǔ)上，對此曾對學(xué)生反復(fù)講過多次，不過由于無法立竿見影，多數(shù)學(xué)生不能很好地堅持，很是遺憾。
