I am an(用a，university雖然是元音字母開頭的單詞，但不是以元音開頭的) university student who will graduate in July this year. The moment when I read the advertisement on(一般用in) newspaper that your editorial office want to employ an editor for magazine makes me very excited.(這句話句子結構混亂，結構是：the moment makes me excited，應該是這件事兒讓我興奮)

　　If you could give me an opportunity to take the interview I would be much grateful.(這一句話應該位于最后一段，第二段主要介紹你自己) I have the confidence to be qualified for this job. To begin with, I am a girl whose interest is in writing and who got prizes in many composition contests. Moreover, my major is Chinese language and literature in university.

　　For four years system study, the(用my比較好) ability in literature has largely improved.Thanks for your time and consideration. Look(Looking) forward to hearing from you soon.