考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University.I am writing letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly advertised position for an accountant.

　　I am sure that I am qualified for it.To begin with,enclose with this letter is my resume,which further detail my academic qualifications and work experience.Then,I am not only familaring with Microsofe Word,Excel,but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills.Last but not least,my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.

　　Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

　　Yours turly,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further detail(應該用第三人稱單數形式) my academic qualifications and work experience. Then, I am not only(應該改為not only I am，與后面的格式保持一致) familaring(拼寫錯誤) with Microsofe(拼寫錯誤) Word, Excel, but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills. Last but not least, my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.

　　Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

　　Yours turly(拼寫錯誤),

　　Li Ming(落款部分位于右下角)

　　點評：7分

　　寫的不錯，要注意拼寫問題。另外句子、用詞最好簡練。

　　I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University. I am writing (加the或this)letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly(拼寫錯誤) advertised position for an accountant.

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University.I am writing letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly advertised position for an accountant.

　　I am sure that I am qualified for it.To begin with,enclose with this letter is my resume,which further detail my academic qualifications and work experience.Then,I am not only familaring with Microsofe Word,Excel,but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills.Last but not least,my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.

　　Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

　　Yours turly,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further detail(應該用第三人稱單數形式) my academic qualifications and work experience. Then, I am not only(應該改為not only I am，與后面的格式保持一致) familaring(拼寫錯誤) with Microsofe(拼寫錯誤) Word, Excel, but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills. Last but not least, my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.

　　Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

　　Yours turly(拼寫錯誤),

　　Li Ming(落款部分位于右下角)

　　點評：7分

　　寫的不錯，要注意拼寫問題。另外句子、用詞最好簡練。

　　I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University. I am writing (加the或this)letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly(拼寫錯誤) advertised position for an accountant.