揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（7）附參考范文
揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（7）附參考范文
第八套
短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1.5分,滿分15分)
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤對標有題號的每一行作出判斷如無錯誤在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾(√)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in
69_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study
70_________
better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,
71_________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons
72_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but
73_________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a
74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place.
75_________
參考答案、、短文改錯
66. happily→happy
67. we后加are
68. thought→think
69. in→on
70 去are或are→be
71.正確
72.that→which
73.work→works
74. unless→if
75. it→we
高考英語書面表達常用詞匯句型集錦
▲舉例：for example，for instance，take…for example，such as，like，and so on，so on and so forth，and so on and on and on， etc.等。
▲說明：that's to say，in other words，namely，等。
▲因果： therefore，as a result，thus，because，because of，thanks to…，owing to…，due to …等
▲遞進：then，besides，in addition， furthermore，moreover， what's more等。
▲順序：
firstly， secondly，thirdly， finally；
in the first place，in the second place， in the third place，
To begin with，then，furthermore，finally；
to start with， next， in addition，finally；
first and foremost，besides， last but not least；
most important of all，moreover，finally（以上為時間順序）
in the front of，in front of …，before， behind， at the back of， on the right/left（of），to the right /left of…，on the other side of …，in the center of …，in the middle of …，at the beginning of ，
at the end of …，by the side of …，on the top of …，at the foot of …，on the bottom of， inside，outside， upstairs， downstairs（以上為空間順序）
▲轉折：nevertheless，however，although， though， but，on the country，after all， oppositely等。
▲總結： in short， in a word， in general， generally speaking， finally，at last，as far as I know，in brief， briefly speaking， in the end， as a matter of fact， in reality， in fact， on the whole， in conclusion， on account of this， therefore等。
▲強調： really， indeed，certainly，surely，for sure， above all等。
▲對比： in the same way，just as，in common with， compared with，
on the one hand…，on the other hand，
for one thing… ，for another，similarly等。
▲平行：and，both…and，as well as，as well，neither…nor…or，either…or，not only…but also
正確使用時間狀語從句的復合句、帶賓語從句的復合句、強調句型、帶定語從句的復合句、帶主語從句的復合句、 條件句、讓步或轉折的句式等
1. 帶時間狀語從句的復合句
?、買t's also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. （2004北京卷）
這類時間狀語從句不僅考得頻繁，而且連詞when， while， as， before， after甚至by the time都考到了，時態上現在時、過去時、過去進行時和過去完成時等都出現了。而且有些年份帶時間狀語從句的復合句還同時出現多次。因此我們建議廣大考生應加強訓練這類復合句，在高考中盡量少犯錯誤，注意時態。
2. 帶賓語從句的復合句
?、買 think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent， and how well you've learned Chinese.
?。∟MET2004， I）
?、贗 am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）
?、跧 would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. （2004江蘇卷）
3. 帶定語從句的復合句
?、買f there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004， I）
②As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷）
4. 其他
▲強調句型 It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （NMET1993）
▲帶主語從句的復合句
?、貶ere is how you can find us
?、贠n the other side， where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.（NMET1999）
▲so that句型：
?、買 became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. （2004廣東卷）
?、贗 am so sorry that I won't be able to …tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）
③The noise was so loud that I couldn't go on studying. （2004廣東卷）
▲讓步或轉折：
?、買 don't know about others， but I used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （NMET2001）
?、贏lthough the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise.
▲條件句：
?、買f there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004，I）
三、書面表達開頭和結尾的寫作
1.書面表達的開頭俗話說萬事開頭難。其實，一點也不難。高考英語書面表達的開頭句一般已為你寫好。你要做的是分段縮進重起第二段。注意千萬不要接著已寫好的首句。一是不美觀，二是不便于閱卷老師細覽。那么你的起頭句實際上是第二段了。開始句根據要求一般可以寫的漂亮一點，即要用一些好的套語開始。比如：
?、貯s is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷）
可是很多考生總在開頭處寫的不盡如人意，總喜歡搞一些生造的句子或詞語來開頭，這是一大忌。有些開頭可以以套語開始，或以俗語開始比較有力，這樣就容易被老師看好。檔位在開始時就已定得很高了。
2.書面表達的結尾：⑦⑧結尾在書面表達的寫作中占有很重要的地位，通常結尾都要算一個內容要求，所以，寫好結尾且讓閱卷老師有一個完整的印象是十分必要的。好的結尾可以是一段，由一句或幾句話組成，能使全文增色。例如：
?、買f there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help.（ 2004全國卷I）
②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
?、踂hat's more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program？ （2004福建卷）
?、躀n short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.（2004湖北卷）
中間段落句
1
---人---tend to have a favorable attitude toward ------
2
Using bicycle contributes greatly to people’s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.
使用自行車有助于人們的身體健康，并極大地緩解了交通阻塞。
3
The harder you work, the more progress you make.你越努力，你越進步。
4
Many people seem to overlook the basic fact:許多人似乎忽視了這個基本事實：
5 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.聽音樂能使我們放松。
6 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge我們絕對不能忽視知識的價值。
7 There is no one but longs to.------人們都希望------ So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們不能浪費它。
結尾句
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although ——indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn’t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論：盡管----很多優點，但它的缺點不可忽視，且遠大于它的優點。
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____
.綜上所述，我們可以清楚地得出結論……
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view,I find----
在總體上很難說……是好還是壞，因為它在很大程度上取決于……的形勢。然而，就我個人而言，我發現…
個人觀點:
As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that ———for the following reasons: 就我而言，我同意
觀點。
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
完全同意……這種觀點（陳述），主要理由如下：
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
但是，……和……都有它們各自的優勢（好處）。例如，……，而……。然而，把這兩者相比較，我更傾向于（喜歡）……
號召：In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
總而言之，整個社會應該密切關注……這個問題。只有這樣，我們才能在將來……
隨著社會的發展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每個人都愿為社會貢獻自已的一份力量，這個社會將要變得越來越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
嚴重影響社會秩序
seriously disturb social order
促進經濟和社會發展
to promote economic
對健康有好處
make for good health
對健康有危害
a hazard to health
破壞環境、污染環境
poisoning the environment
環境保護
protect the environment
浪費時間、浪費金錢、浪費精力
a waste of money,time and energy
促進學習
facilitating learning
影響學習
influnce one's study
提高自身水平
upgrade oneself
反對
disapproval
贊成
in favor of
★ 形容詞：
1. 貧窮的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken
2. 富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off
3. 優秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding
4. 積極的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous
5. 消極的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable
6. 明顯的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest
7. 健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome
8. 驚人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous
9. 美麗的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching
10. 有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated
11. 流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive
★ 動詞：
1. 提高，加強：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize
2 減輕: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten
3. 解決：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with
4. 拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate
5. 培養: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture
6. 激發，鼓勵：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur
7. 認為： think = assert= hold = claim = argue
8. 完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve
9. 保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold
10. 有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize
★ 名詞：
1. 影響：influence= impact
2. 危險：danger = perils =hazard
3. 污染：pollution = contamination4. 人類：human beings= mankind = human race
5. 老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens
6. 幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being
7. 老師：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers
8. 教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing
9. 青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents
10. 優點：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue
11. 責任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability
12. 能力： ability = capacity = power = skill
13. 職業： job = career = employment = profession
14. 娛樂： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment
15. 孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid
★ 短語：
1. 充滿了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with
2. 努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for
3. 從事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for
4. 在當代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age
5. 大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of
高考英語書面表達指導
英語書面表達經典句型必背
1.英語作文中常用關聯詞:
并列關系:and,as well as,also...
遞進關系:besides,in addition,moreover,what’s more...
