訓練（11）及參考范文

　　開放作文(15分)

　　請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　基本分析：

　　1. 三分之一描寫要點：陽光，樓(很靠近)，彎曲的樹。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）

　　2. 三分之二議論著眼立意：

　　—— 1.人生角度：在成長的道路上（樹的成長），有曲折，有困難，（建筑的阻擋，彎曲）但是只要向著光明和希望（太陽）去努力拼搏，堅持不懈，還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功（樹在樓的夾縫中長高了，超出建筑）。

　　—— 2.和諧角度： 城市的發展（建筑）和環境的可持續發展（樹的成長）要協調，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在陽光下）

　　3. 立意與現實生活關系：1. 引導90后要具有積極的生活態度，生活非一帆風順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環保熱點，城市和環境的和諧發展也是低碳生活的必需。

　　***********************************************************結束

　　預測五：

　　近年微博（microblog）在中國越來越流行，2011年也被有關媒體稱為“微博元年”。假設你是校報記者，請根據下列提示為校報寫一篇介紹微博的英語短文。1.非常方便，人們可以隨時利用微博來表達心聲，交流想法；2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；3.與朋友分享心情，增進他們之間的了解；4.也有潛在的危險，有可能泄露個人隱私或其他重要信息；5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹慎。詞數：100左右（已給部分不計入總詞數）Microblog has become part of our life.

　　【參考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

　　預測六：

　　為開展“敬老”活動，你校特意邀請了梁會蘭女士來做報告。梁會蘭女士是北京下崗工人，16年來，她義務照顧十幾位孤寡老人和殘疾老人的生活起居。請你據此以校學生會的名義寫一個通知，要點如下：1.報告的目的；2.報告人介紹；3.報告時間和地點：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,學校報告廳；4.參加人員：全體學生。注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.通知的格式已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　【參考范文】

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　訓練（11）及參考范文

　　開放作文(15分)

　　請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　基本分析：

　　1. 三分之一描寫要點：陽光，樓(很靠近)，彎曲的樹。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）

　　2. 三分之二議論著眼立意：

　　—— 1.人生角度：在成長的道路上（樹的成長），有曲折，有困難，（建筑的阻擋，彎曲）但是只要向著光明和希望（太陽）去努力拼搏，堅持不懈，還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功（樹在樓的夾縫中長高了，超出建筑）。

　　—— 2.和諧角度： 城市的發展（建筑）和環境的可持續發展（樹的成長）要協調，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在陽光下）

　　3. 立意與現實生活關系：1. 引導90后要具有積極的生活態度，生活非一帆風順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環保熱點，城市和環境的和諧發展也是低碳生活的必需。

　　***********************************************************結束

　　預測五：

　　近年微博（microblog）在中國越來越流行，2011年也被有關媒體稱為“微博元年”。假設你是校報記者，請根據下列提示為校報寫一篇介紹微博的英語短文。1.非常方便，人們可以隨時利用微博來表達心聲，交流想法；2.給人們提供了一種釋放壓力的方式；3.與朋友分享心情，增進他們之間的了解；4.也有潛在的危險，有可能泄露個人隱私或其他重要信息；5.綜上所述，使用微博要謹慎。詞數：100左右（已給部分不計入總詞數）Microblog has become part of our life.

　　【參考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

　　預測六：

　　為開展“敬老”活動，你校特意邀請了梁會蘭女士來做報告。梁會蘭女士是北京下崗工人，16年來，她義務照顧十幾位孤寡老人和殘疾老人的生活起居。請你據此以校學生會的名義寫一個通知，要點如下：1.報告的目的；2.報告人介紹；3.報告時間和地點：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,學校報告廳；4.參加人員：全體學生。注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.通知的格式已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union

　　【參考范文】

　　Notice

　　Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.

　　December 14,2011

　　Students’ Union