創(chuàng)新設(shè)計2024版高考英語（譯林版）總復(fù)習(xí)（同步訓(xùn)練）：必修1Unit 3 Looking good，feeling good寫作模板
模板 __②__發(fā)言稿
典例
最近，你們班上將要組織一場以“To be self-confident”為題的主題班會。你是英語課代表，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于120詞的文章作為發(fā)言稿。開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。
提示：1.簡述自信的重要性。
2．假設(shè)你以前缺乏信心……
(1)誰給了你鼓勵？ (2) 什么事讓你改變了一切？
3．可適當加入自己的評論。
Girls and boys，
Life is but a hard and bitter journey...
【寫作策略】
1．仔細審題：(1)體裁：發(fā)言稿。(2)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時。(3)人稱：第一人稱。
2．確定結(jié)構(gòu)：(1)自信重要性。(2)自身經(jīng)歷。(3)自己的評論。
3．篩選詞匯：(lack of ；self-confident; success; encourage ；try my best to；等。)
4．句型搜索：( I’d like to...；I feel strongly that...等。)
5．組句成篇：(When...; Later; Since then...等。)
【范文賞析】
Girls and boys，
Life is but ahardandbitterjourney.Therefore，①I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.”
When I was 14，②Isuffered from a lack of confidence.I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid of speaking in public.
?、跮ater，something happened and changed my life.It was a speech contest held in our school.④My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me.
Ichoseatopicmostappropriatetome—Self-confidence and Success.⑤I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror.With my mother’s great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest.
Since then，⑥I have felt strongly that self-confidence is the first step towards success.So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future. 【名師點評】
★①是非常重要的句式，平實地道地表達筆者思想。
★④母親的鼓勵促成了自己的超越。
★⑤自己的努力與勤奮是獲得成功的關(guān)鍵因素之一。
★總體評價：語言運用得體，過渡自然；情感真摯，情景真實，有較強的感染力。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
Elegance(優(yōu)雅)(原文) So-so(普通)
(1)Therefore，I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.” So I think we should be self-confident when anything happens.
(2)When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence. When I was 14，I was not confident at all and I experienced much disappointment.
(3)My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in
me. My mother asked me to take part in it and she had great confidence in me.
(4)With my mother’s great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest！ Because I worked hard and my mother loved and encouraged me ，I won the first prize in the contest！
(5)So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future. So，friends，be confident and have a bright future.
【臨摹翻譯】
1. 范文佳句：Therefore，I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.”
臨摹翻譯：在我看來，無論發(fā)生什么事，我們都必須同樣努力工作。
In my opinion，no matter what happens，we should work hard the same.
2．范文佳句：When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence.
臨摹翻譯：現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生苦于大量的作業(yè)和睡眠時間不足。
Many_students_nowadays_suffer_from_too_much_homework_and_lack_of_enough_sleep_time.
3．范文佳句：My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me.
臨摹翻譯：老師最終說服他報名參加下周舉行的英語演講比賽。
The_teacher_persuaded_him_to_enter_for_the_English_speech_contest_to_be_held_next_month_at_last.
4．范文佳句：With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!
臨摹翻譯：在老師的幫助下，我的寫作能力自去年以來得以很大的提高。
With_the_help_of_my_teachermy_writing_ability_has_been_greatly_improved_since_last_
year.
5．范文佳句：Since then, I have felt strongly that self-confidence is the first step towards success.
臨摹翻譯：自從他來到這里，他每天都花一個小時練習(xí)英語口語。
Since_he_came_here，he_has_spent_an_hour_practicing_spoken_English_every_day.
6．范文佳句：So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future.
臨摹翻譯：更自信些，你將會贏得這場比賽。
Be_more_confident_and_you_will_win_the_competition.
模板 __②__發(fā)言稿
典例
最近，你們班上將要組織一場以“To be self-confident”為題的主題班會。你是英語課代表，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于120詞的文章作為發(fā)言稿。開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。
提示：1.簡述自信的重要性。
2．假設(shè)你以前缺乏信心……
(1)誰給了你鼓勵？ (2) 什么事讓你改變了一切？
3．可適當加入自己的評論。
Girls and boys，
Life is but a hard and bitter journey...
【寫作策略】
1．仔細審題：(1)體裁：發(fā)言稿。(2)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時。(3)人稱：第一人稱。
2．確定結(jié)構(gòu)：(1)自信重要性。(2)自身經(jīng)歷。(3)自己的評論。
3．篩選詞匯：(lack of ；self-confident; success; encourage ；try my best to；等。)
4．句型搜索：( I’d like to...；I feel strongly that...等。)
5．組句成篇：(When...; Later; Since then...等。)
【范文賞析】
Girls and boys，
Life is but ahardandbitterjourney.Therefore，①I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.”
When I was 14，②Isuffered from a lack of confidence.I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid of speaking in public.
?、跮ater，something happened and changed my life.It was a speech contest held in our school.④My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me.
Ichoseatopicmostappropriatetome—Self-confidence and Success.⑤I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror.With my mother’s great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest.
Since then，⑥I have felt strongly that self-confidence is the first step towards success.So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future. 【名師點評】
★①是非常重要的句式，平實地道地表達筆者思想。
★④母親的鼓勵促成了自己的超越。
★⑤自己的努力與勤奮是獲得成功的關(guān)鍵因素之一。
★總體評價：語言運用得體，過渡自然；情感真摯，情景真實，有較強的感染力。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
Elegance(優(yōu)雅)(原文) So-so(普通)
(1)Therefore，I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.” So I think we should be self-confident when anything happens.
(2)When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence. When I was 14，I was not confident at all and I experienced much disappointment.
(3)My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in
me. My mother asked me to take part in it and she had great confidence in me.
(4)With my mother’s great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest！ Because I worked hard and my mother loved and encouraged me ，I won the first prize in the contest！
(5)So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future. So，friends，be confident and have a bright future.
【臨摹翻譯】
1. 范文佳句：Therefore，I would like to say，“No matter what happens，be self-confident.”
臨摹翻譯：在我看來，無論發(fā)生什么事，我們都必須同樣努力工作。
In my opinion，no matter what happens，we should work hard the same.
2．范文佳句：When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence.
臨摹翻譯：現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生苦于大量的作業(yè)和睡眠時間不足。
Many_students_nowadays_suffer_from_too_much_homework_and_lack_of_enough_sleep_time.
3．范文佳句：My mother persuaded me to participate because she had great confidence in me.
臨摹翻譯：老師最終說服他報名參加下周舉行的英語演講比賽。
The_teacher_persuaded_him_to_enter_for_the_English_speech_contest_to_be_held_next_month_at_last.
4．范文佳句：With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!
臨摹翻譯：在老師的幫助下，我的寫作能力自去年以來得以很大的提高。
With_the_help_of_my_teachermy_writing_ability_has_been_greatly_improved_since_last_
year.
5．范文佳句：Since then, I have felt strongly that self-confidence is the first step towards success.
臨摹翻譯：自從他來到這里，他每天都花一個小時練習(xí)英語口語。
Since_he_came_here，he_has_spent_an_hour_practicing_spoken_English_every_day.
6．范文佳句：So，friends，be confident and you will have a bright future.
臨摹翻譯：更自信些，你將會贏得這場比賽。
Be_more_confident_and_you_will_win_the_competition.
