【高考預(yù)測(cè)】

　　短文改錯(cuò)題旨在考查考生發(fā)現(xiàn)、判斷、糾正語(yǔ)篇錯(cuò)誤的能力。它要求考生具備扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底，相當(dāng)高的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力；此題涉及到詞匯、語(yǔ)法、慣用法、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)、行文邏輯等各個(gè)方面。但是，這種試題并不是檢測(cè)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的，而是檢測(cè)考生寫作能力中的校驗(yàn)?zāi)芰Α＿@種能力是進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)的必備能力，寫作的成效需要良好的寫作程序的支持，而在寫作程序中，檢驗(yàn)?zāi)芰κ遣豢扇鄙俚囊亍０讯涛母腻e(cuò)當(dāng)作語(yǔ)法練習(xí)是對(duì)高考中短文改錯(cuò)的誤解。

　　一、短文改錯(cuò)題的解題步驟

　　1.通讀全文，掌握大意

　　短文改錯(cuò)不是單句改錯(cuò)，每一句的語(yǔ)意表達(dá)，結(jié)構(gòu)選擇是受土下文制約的。如謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，代詞的指代功能等都要依照上下文的線索進(jìn)行判斷。因此，考生應(yīng)立足:于上下文，正確理解作者意圖，把握短文的題材、體裁、時(shí)態(tài)主線，人物和主要情節(jié)等，從整體上把握全文。

　　2.整句理解，逐行推敲

　　通讀全文，了解文章大意、寫作方式之后，要細(xì)致分析每一個(gè)完整的句子。應(yīng)把主要注與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)或上下文的時(shí)態(tài)保持一致等。

　　2.連接手段的錯(cuò)誤

　　高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)命題的一個(gè)重要方面就是考查連接手段。連詞使用不當(dāng)會(huì)造成上下文無(wú)法銜接。英語(yǔ)中的詞與詞、句與句必須使用并列或從屬連詞將其連接起來(lái)，，要判斷句與句之間的關(guān)系是并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、遞進(jìn)還是讓步，從而選擇相應(yīng)的連詞。若為復(fù)合句，首先判斷屬:廠何種從句，然后根據(jù)主從句之間的關(guān)系判斷連接詞的使用是否準(zhǔn)確或是否有遺漏或多余的現(xiàn)象。

　　3.平行結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤

　　在表達(dá)相互平行的概念時(shí)，要使用相同的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，即動(dòng)詞與動(dòng)詞對(duì)應(yīng)，形容詞與形容詞對(duì)應(yīng)，分詞與分詞對(duì)應(yīng)，不定式與不定式對(duì)應(yīng)，短語(yǔ)與短語(yǔ)對(duì)應(yīng)。它經(jīng)常借助于并列連詞and，or，but或連詞詞組not only...but also...，not...but...，either...or...，neither...nor...，as well as等。

　　4.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式上的錯(cuò)誤

　　主要考查不定式符號(hào)to的多余或遺漏；to是介詞還是不定式符號(hào)的辨認(rèn)(后跟動(dòng)詞原形考生對(duì)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的掌握情況。

　　8.詞語(yǔ)搭配的錯(cuò)誤

　　主要考查介詞與動(dòng)詞、名詞、形容詞的固定搭配；副詞與動(dòng)詞的固定搭配；及物動(dòng)詞后多介詞或副詞以及不及物動(dòng)詞后缺少介詞，英語(yǔ)中的一些固定句型及習(xí)慣搭配等。

　　9.詞性分辨的錯(cuò)誤

　　詞在句中的位置及與其他詞所形成的修飾與被修飾的關(guān)系決定了其正確形式，詞在句中不同的句法功能要求使用與之相匹配的詞性。

　　10.行文邏輯上的錯(cuò)誤

　　短文改錯(cuò)中的行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤是最難改的一種錯(cuò)誤。因?yàn)橐R(shí)別和改出某種錯(cuò)誤，考生必須細(xì)讀全文，在理解短文中心思想、掌握全文邏輯發(fā)展順序的基礎(chǔ)上，作出正確判斷。

　　下面，我們以典型例題試題中幾道有代表意義的短文改錯(cuò)題來(lái)分析一下這些種類的錯(cuò)誤形式。

　　1. (2024精選模擬)短文改錯(cuò)

　　My car just wouldn’t move any further. It was complete

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　　dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold

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　　wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d

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　　have to spend the night in the ear. Maybe I can find a

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　　telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I

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　　found a small house standing on a field with a light

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　　shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and

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　　was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the

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　　door but listened to my story carefully. He said he had

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　　no telephone, and it wasn’t one within walking distance,

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　　but offered to come and look at my car.

　　去分詞做表語(yǔ)。

　　9.but改為and.連接手段的錯(cuò)誤。兩個(gè)動(dòng)作之間不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

　　10.it改為there.一致關(guān)系的錯(cuò)誤。這里當(dāng)是表示“存在有”的there be句型。

　　2.(典型例題改錯(cuò))

　　My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named him

　　Jack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us

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　　in a tree outside our bedroom, calling “Hello” as we lay in

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　　bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when

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　　they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself.

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　　We’d throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away

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　　and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch

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　　the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and

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　　sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack

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　　were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we

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　　would return at night to hear that he’d picked up from the

　　radio in the day.

　　10.

　　試題分析

　　8.去掉for.多余詞匯的錯(cuò)誤。按照文章的意思是表示轉(zhuǎn)折的but，而不是表示“要不是”的but for。

　　9.were改為was.一致關(guān)系的錯(cuò)誤。主語(yǔ)是表示單數(shù)意義的"the most wonderful thing".[

　　10.that改為what.連接手段的錯(cuò)誤。賓語(yǔ)從句中 pick up 缺少賓語(yǔ)。

　　3.(2024精選模擬)

　　Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over

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　　the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since

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　　long ago, many adults and children called their friends together

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　　to spend hours, even days play games. One of the reasons people

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　　like to play is that sports help them to live happily. In otherwords,

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　　they help to keep people strong and feel good. When people are

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　　playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities

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　　for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy.

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　　Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American

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　　big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.

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　　試題分析

　　10.sell改為buy．行文邏輯上的錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)文意是“買票看球賽”。

　　4. (2024精選模擬)短文改錯(cuò)

　　Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often

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　　broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself,

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　　and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls,

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　　a car maker, was very interested in Royce’s car, but soon

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　　Rolls arid Royce go into business together. One of their first

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　　model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the

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　　world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down

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　　once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡ 2 to put the car

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　　back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver

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　　Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”.

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　　試題解析

　　9.This改為It.一致關(guān)系的錯(cuò)誤。這里是形式主語(yǔ)it

　　10.regarded后加as．固定搭配的錯(cuò)誤。短語(yǔ)regard as意為“把……認(rèn)為／看作”。

　　5.短文改錯(cuò)

　　There are advantage for students to work while1.

　　studying at school. One of them was that

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　　__

　　they can earn money, for the most part.

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　　students working to earn money for their own 4. __

　　use. Earning their own momey allow them

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　　to spend on anything as if they please.

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　　They would have to ask thier parents for

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　　money or for permission to do things by

　　8. __

　　the money. Some students may also to save

　　9. __

　　up for our college or future use.

　　10.

　　__

　　試題分析

　　1.advantage改為advantages.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。此處 advantage表示“利益，益處”，可數(shù)名詞。

　　6.短文改錯(cuò)

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

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　　Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in

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　　English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could

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　　only speak a few words. But one and a half year later.

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　　I now think English fun to learn. I got a lost from your

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　　encouraging words. I will always remember what you

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　　said, “If you try to, you can be No. 1 !”I hope you’ve

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　　had peasant journet home and will come to China

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　　again sometimes in the future. I will write again 9.

　　and send you the photos we take together.

　　10.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Min

　　試題分析

　　1.with改為for.固定用法錯(cuò)誤。thank sb. for sth為固定短語(yǔ)。

　　2.not改為no.否定詞用示錯(cuò)誤。ho修飾后面的名詞interest。

　　3.terribly改為terrible.形容詞副詞用法錯(cuò)誤。系表結(jié)構(gòu)中當(dāng)用形容詞。

　　4.year改為years.名詞的數(shù)與格的錯(cuò)誤。一年半是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　5.Engish后加is.句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。think后賓語(yǔ)從句中缺謂語(yǔ)。

　　6.正確。

　　7.去掉to.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用法錯(cuò)誤。此處應(yīng)該省略to。

　　8.journey前加a.冠詞用法錯(cuò)誤。journey是可數(shù)名詞。

　　9.sometimes改為sometime.副詞用法錯(cuò)誤。Sometime表示未來(lái)的某個(gè)時(shí)候。

　　10.take改為took.時(shí)態(tài)用法錯(cuò)誤。寄去的照片是以前照的，故用過(guò)去時(shí)。

　　Passage 1

　　Many many years ago there had a merchant

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　　答案: had改為was／lived

　　named Abul. He was the richer man in the

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　　答案: richer改為richest

　　country. He had large, strong boxes filling

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　　答案: filling改為filled

　　with gold, and his storehouses were full of

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　　答案: 正確

　　value goods. He owned land and houses and

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　　答案: value改為valuable

　　gardens. But though he was such rich, he

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　　答案: such改為so

　　spent least than the poorest beggar in the

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　　答案: least改為less

　　city. He ate only dates and breads, and wore

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　　答案: breads改為bread

　　his clothing for scores of years before he bought

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　　答案: clothing改為clothes

　　new ones. He had not bought new shoes since

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　　thirty years.

　　答案: since改為for

　　Passage 2

　　During this summer holiday I took part in special

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　　答案: special前加a

　　summer camp with some of my classmates. Where we

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　　答案: Where改為There

　　made some new friends who were senior students from

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　　答案: 正確

　　Canvey, a town in the Thames, lying to the east of London.

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　　答案: in改為on

　　As hosts, we showed them around many places of interests

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　　答案: interests改為interest

　　in Beijing, such the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and

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　　答案: such后加as

　　the Summer Palace and we tell them about the changes

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　　答案: tell改為told

　　which had been taken place in Beijing. They said that

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　　答案: 去掉been

　　Beijing was quite different with what they had heard of and

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　　答案: with改為from

　　it was as beautifully as Canvey. I think the summer camp

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　　is of great value.

　　答案: beautifully改為beautiful

　　Passage 3

　　My dream is always to visit to London, England. I

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　　答案: 去掉第二個(gè)to

　　imagined London like a big city with some of the best

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　　答案: 1ike改為as

　　art shows in the world. This summer my dream come true

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　　答案: come改為came

　　when I spent a week in London. I lived in a hotel in the

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　　答案: 1ived改為stayed

　　theatre area, but on the first day I took several long walks

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　　答案: but改為and

　　through the city staring all the famous buildings. Because

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　　答案: staring后加at

　　there is wide variety of programs, I could go to a different

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　　答案: wide前加a

　　theater every night to see different shows. The best was when

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　　答案: 正確

　　I went to see a playing by the most famous writer in the English

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　　答案: playing改為play

　　language-Shakespeare. This is was my mostly enjoyable vacation.

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　　答案: mostly改為most

　　Passage 4

　　During the summer holiday, I think I should do something

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　　答案: think改為thought

　　meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food

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　　答案: instead后加of

　　restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day

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　　答案: cleaner前加a

　　for three weeks.

　　The job was hard and bored and seemedendless,

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　　答案: bored改為boring

　　it made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way.

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　　答案: 第一個(gè)it改為which

　　After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started

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　　答案: determinations改為determination

　　off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the