山東長島縣2024高考英語一輪短文改錯選練

　　短文改錯----議論文

　　2024屆河北省邯鄲市館陶縣一中高三7月調研考試

　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　71.had改為 have

　　72. student 改為 students

　　73.do 改為 does

　　Do harm to 對。。有害。整篇文章用一般現在時來敘述。

　　74. realized 后的that去掉Relize后面引導賓語從句由how來引導，故把that去掉。

　　75.boring 改為 bored

　　Be bored with 厭煩。。。

　　76. other 改為 others

　　77.himself 改為 themselves

　　78. causing 改為 caused

　　79. the waste of money 中the 改為 a

　　A waste of sth浪費某物。

　　80. danger 改為 dangerous

　　2024模擬短文改錯MToday we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning

　?。甠_____we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began

　?。甠_____to climb．The hill was high and some of us got tired

　　．______

　　soon, and all of us were very excited．We cheered

　?。甠_____

　　happily when we got the top．We had our lunch there

　?。甠______

　　and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately，

　　．________

　　when we walked down the hill，We were caught by

　?。甠______

　　a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and

　　8．_______

　　raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached

　?。甠______

　　the parking lot safely．In spite of the unexpecting rain

　?。甠_____

　　and wind，we had a good time．

　　. morning前加the 考查冠詞的用法。注意習語in the morning。

　　. late改為later

　　考查副詞比較級的用法。此處表示“遲到了一小時”，故用比較級。

　　. 正確 經分析本句正確。

　　. and改為but

　　考查句間的邏輯關系。根據文意此處為轉折關系。

　　. got后加to或got改為reached

　　考查動詞的用法。此處the top作賓語，故改為got to 或及物動詞reached。

　　. 去掉had

　　考查動詞時態。根據句中的and可知，前后是并列關系，時態應一致。

　　. by改為in

　　考查介詞的用法。解題關鍵：掌握動詞catch的用法，be caught in意為：遭遇。。。。

　　8. calmlycalm 考查形容詞的用法。此處remain為系動詞，其后接形容詞。

　　. both改為all

　　考查代詞的用法。根據文意沒有兩者的范圍。

　　. unexpecting改為unexpected考查分詞的用法。此處unexpected意為：意料之外的。

　　短文改錯N

　　Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me

　　1_____

　　most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And he’s one of

　　2______

　　the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more

　　3______

　　attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers.

　　4_______

　　He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively.

　　5______

　　In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand

　　6______

　　“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us

　　7______

　　to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help,

　　8______

　　we’ve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a

　　9_____

　　wonderful

　　world of “why” as we all admire and respect him.

　　10_____

　　【參考答案及解析】

　　1. impress改為impresses考查主謂一致。此處先行詞one前有the，故其后定語從句的謂語動詞應和one保持一致，用單數。

　　. so改為but 考查句間的邏輯關系。根據語境此處應為轉折關系。

　　. teacher 改為teachers 考查名詞的單復數。根據句中的one of 可知，后面的名詞應用復數形式。

　　. comparing改為compared 考查固定短語。和。。。相比應用compared with/to。

　　. actively改為active 考查形容詞的用法。此處make 后接形容詞作賓補。

　　. 正確

　　經分析本句正確。

　　. instead后加of考查固定短語。根據后面的giving可知，其前應用介詞of。

　　8. myself改為ourselves 考查代詞指代一致。根據文意反身代詞應和us相一致。故用ourselves。

　　. 去掉from

　　考查動詞的用法。learn from意為：向。。。學習，此處不合文意。

　　. as改為that 考查固定句型。此處考查such。。。that。。。句型。

　　Dear sir,

　　Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________

　　about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It

　　77. _____________

　　sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with

　　78. _____________

　　you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________

　　for my collection. Most of them were those what I had

　　80. _____________

　　been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________

　　you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________

　　I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________

　　Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________

　　write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________

　　your college life.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Jason

　　【參考答案】

　　76.I后加am

　　77. meet →met

　　78.√

　　79.去掉them

　　80.what→that或去掉those

　　81. by →in

　　82.wish→wished

　　83.little→few

　　84.your→my

　　84.what→how

　　【短文改錯】

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

　　1___

　　Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in

　　2_____

　　English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could

　　3____

　　only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,

　　4____

　　I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your

　　5___

　　encouraging words. I will always remember what you

　　6____

　　said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve

　　7、___

　　had pleasant journey home and will come to china

　　8、___

　　again sometimes in the future. I will write again

　　9____

　　and send you the photos we take together

　　10____

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

　　for

　　Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in

　　no

　　English .My pronunciation was terribly .I could

　　terrible

　　only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,

　　years

　　I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your

　　is

　　encouraging words .I will always remember what you

　　right

　　said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve

　　/to

　　had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china

　　a

　　again sometimes in the future. I will write again sometime

　　and send you the photos we take together

　　took

　　【2024高考復習】閱讀理解Eight days for just ￥12,000

　　Departure time：May，October 2024

　　Includes：

　　●

　　Return flights from 6 China’s airports to Naples

　　●

　　Return airport to hotel transport

　　●

　　Seven nights’ accommodation at the 3-star Hotel Nice

　　●

　　Breakfast

　　● The service of guides

　　● Government taxes

　　Join us for a wonderful holiday in one of the Europe’s most wonderful corners—Naples in Italy if you want to have a nice time in a beautiful small quiet place.The ancient Romans called the city “happy land” with attractive coastline，colorful towns，splendid views and the warm Mediterranean Sea.Your best choice for a truly memorable holiday!

　　Choose between the peaceful traditional villages of Sant’ Agata，setting on a hillside six miles away from Sorrento，or the more lively and well-known international resort town of Sorrento，with wonderful views over the Bay of Naples.

　　Breathtaking

　　scenery，famous

　　sights

　　and

　　European restaurants everywhere.From the mysterious Isle of Capri to the hunting ruins of Pompeii，and from the unforgettable “Amalfi Drive” to the delightful resorts (度假勝地) of Positano，Sorrento and Ravello，the area is a feast for the eyes！Join us，and you won’t be disappointed!

　　Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.A single room，another ￥2,000.A group of ten college students，￥10,000 for each.

　　Like to know more？Telephone Newmarket Air Holidays Ltd.on：0845 -226 -7788(All calls charge at local rates)．

　　【語篇解讀】　優美的海岸，繽紛的城鎮，絢爛的風景，溫暖的海水……神奇的意大利之旅將帶給你難忘的享受、永恒的記憶。還在猶豫什么呢？趕快報名參加吧！

　　1．All the following are included in the price of ￥12,000 EXCEPT________.

　　A．transport between airport and hotel

　　B．telephone calls made by tourists

　　C．the service of guides to tourists

　　D．a double room for every two tourists

　　解析　細節理解題。根據“Includes”中的“Return airport to hotel transport”“The service of guides”和倒數第二段第一句“Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.”可知，A、C、D均包括在內，但不包括游客打電話的費用，故選B。

　　答案　B

　　2．If you don’t like sharing a room with others，you have to pay________.

　　A．￥12,000

　　B．￥10,000

　　C．￥2,000

　　D．￥14,000

　　解析　推理判斷題。根據倒數第二段中的“A single room，another ￥2,000.”可知住單間需要另外支付2 000元，由此可推斷游客需要在原來的價格上再多付2 000元，即14 000元。

　　答案　D 3．If you like to visit historical sites，which of the following is your best choice?

　　A．Amalfi. B．Sant’ Agata.

　　C．Pompeii. D．Sorrento.

　　解析　推理判斷題。根據倒數第三段第二句中的“the hunting ruins of Pompeii”可推知意大利古城龐貝是狩獵遺址，由此可推斷它是歷史名勝。

　　答案　C

　　4．Who is the advertisement intended for?

　　A．Potential tourists. B．College students.

　　C．Government officers.　

　　D

　　Old people

　　解析　推理判斷題。結合文章中提到的費用、出發日期、服務項目、景點介紹以及聯系方式等可推測本文的宣傳對象是潛在的游客。

　　答案　A

　　閱讀理解Parents are creating an “I want it now” generation by indulging children’s every demand at Christmas，say experts.Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish，claim the education analysts.

　　Consumer-savvy children are forcing their families into racking up huge debts and risk becoming spoilt and dissatisfied in the future.

　　Behavioural consultant Chris Calland said，“Parents are desperate to make Christmas into a magical fairy tale for their kids.There’s nothing wrong with that as such.The problem arises when it means always giving into all our children’s demands—even if they are beyond our price range or not age-appropriate.”

　　Ms Calland，who runs “Santa Says No”

　　style sessions with

　　colleague Nicky Hutchinson，added，“Many of us go into so much debt providing the gifts our children want that we spend the rest of the year paying off the bills.Yet so often the parcels we’ve carefully wrapped，once opened，are just pushed away because the very thing our little boy or girl was once so desperate for，they have now lost interest in.”

　　Ms Calland and Ms Hutchinson have drawn up a list of guidelines to help parents manage their offspring’s Christmas lists this year.They say that adults can actually improve their relationships with their children by resisting “pester (糾纏) power”．

　　Ms Calland said，“All too often we say yes because we want an easier life when the fact is that we’re only building up problems for the future.We are helping create a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others and the necessity of hard work.”

　　“Children learn fast—if we sometimes change our mind，they quickly realise it might be worth lying on the floor and screaming for it.Make sure you and your partner are working together on this.Be consistent.And try not to get caught up in competition with other families or friends.”

　　【語篇解讀】　本文是時文閱讀。由于父母對孩子圣誕節的要求無限制地滿足，產生了“I want it now”一代。

　　5．What is the main problem with the “I want it now” generation?

　　A．They are quite self-centered.

　　B．They like to live in fairy tales.

　　C．They waste a lot of money on gifts.

　　D．They can’t keep their interest in gifts.

　　解析　細節理解題。從第一段最后一句中的“Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish”以及倒數第二段中的“a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others”可知“ I want it now”一代很自私、以自我為中心。

　　答案　A

　　6．What is probably the aim of “Santa Says No” style sessions?

　　A．To advise on how to wrap gifts properly.