雅思寫作輔導(dǎo):詞匯的運用和句子的處理
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外,詞匯的運用和句子的處理,也起著決定性作用。
句子可長可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡單句,文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的復(fù)雜句,讀起來也很費力。最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點也有些差別:
The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. +2)
Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter.
In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. - )
There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter.
As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter.
和的句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎?