考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗號)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很不錯，但是要明確一點，要靈活使用模版，因為skill 前面填的是具體的某項能力，所有要用單數，如果是填一個形容詞，例如professional，那么就可以用復數了。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗號)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學你好，你的作文寫的很不錯，但是要明確一點，要靈活使用模版，因為skill 前面填的是具體的某項能力，所有要用單數，如果是填一個形容詞，例如professional，那么就可以用復數了。